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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2001-05-27 03:13 PM


People who live in glass houses
shouldnt throw stones
Or air their dirty laundry
in public
Your love is like a rolling stone
gathering no moss along the way
Live and let live is NOT
a truism you live by
You want your cake
and you want to eat it too
Its all take and no give
with you
And history just repeats itself
every time you walk in the door
So I think you should make like a
banana and just split
'Cuz whats good for the goose
its ALWAYS great for the gandar
And you've already kissed this
one goodbye....


HEHEHEHE!!!!!!!!!



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Marsha
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1 posted 2001-05-27 03:26 PM


Paula my sweet poetic sister, have I told you today how truly great you are. This is utterly firstclass you know I love this don't you.

Because if you don't know by now that I really adore you then there's no hope for me.

Love and warm stuff
Mushy
    


Oh btw this is an amazing write from you love, just in case you didn't know I Love This

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Watersign6
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2 posted 2001-05-27 05:31 PM


WoooHooo! way to write Paula  
Sven
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3 posted 2001-05-27 09:14 PM


Paula, Paula, Paula. . . LOL. . .  . . . I think that you might have taken the prize here with this one. . . LOL

Cliches be damned!!  LOL  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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4 posted 2001-05-27 10:47 PM


Paula~
You are just the greatest thing going !
My favorite poem of all time of yours. LOL !
And I mean that from the bottom of my heart !
In all sincerity, please take this compliment seriously.
When I grow up I want to be just like you.
You just take the cake with this one !
Ta-Ta ... and all that jazz !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-05-28 08:41 AM


Too cute...nothing to teach you....
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2001-05-28 09:02 AM


Paula,
With that mouth full you need a drink. Enjoyed

JLR
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7 posted 2001-05-28 09:42 AM


Should've seen this coming...blindsided by humor!
ethome
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8 posted 2001-05-28 10:09 AM


Great cliche' poem Paula my dear poet friend!  
Temptress
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9 posted 2001-05-28 05:13 PM


LOL!   Enjoyed.


theLadypoet
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10 posted 2001-05-28 05:27 PM


Fine as hair on a frog!
Thanks for a smile.

theLadypoet


Paula Finn
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11 posted 2001-05-29 12:16 PM


Marsha... you go right to my head girl...thank you

Watersign6...thank you so much

Sven...ooooooooo you mean I won? COOL COOL..oh wait ahem I gotta act cool  hows this?

Paula Finn
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12 posted 2001-05-29 12:31 PM


Geez Sven got me allllllll excited hehehe

Marge...Oh LOL...you are jsut too cute Lady

Sunshine...now I always learn from you lady

Seymour....yeaahhhh lol....all in one breath too

JLR...yep yep you shoulda...hehehe

ethome...lol it was fun to write sweetie...

Temptress...twas sure fun to play with

theLadyPoet...LMAO thank you


brian madden
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13 posted 2001-05-31 02:20 PM


within those humourous observations there is a lot of sense. Thanks for making me smile while reading this  

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

Charisma
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14 posted 2001-05-31 02:58 PM


Great one....love this cliche...as its quite original....outstanding funny piece my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

Paula Finn
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15 posted 2001-06-01 12:55 PM


Brian....Im glad I could make you smile...

Charisma...thank you I am glad you liked it

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