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Open Poetry #14

Fire and Water

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-27 03:01 PM

Fire and Water

melt me in your heat
when you touch my skin
drape me in your touch
start from within
whisper out my name
say it to my heart
sparks fanned from whispers
burning flames start
let me be your dream
the warmth of your fire
smoldering the ache
echo of true desire
gushing I am water
to quench your thirst
between fire and water
souls immersed

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-27 03:09 PM

I feel like I just read my own heart!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

2 posted 2001-05-27 04:13 PM

Helen,
Such talent, keep up the dream, you are so very talented all is true because I know it
comes from deep down in your heart.
g-hm

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-05-27 04:30 PM

between fire and water....ummm....steamy!

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

4 posted 2001-05-27 05:04 PM

whoa! what a Poem,absolutely marvelous

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-05-27 09:16 PM

helen, you're getting better with every word. . . keep it up!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

6 posted 2001-05-27 11:48 PM

"gushing I am water
to quench your thirst
between fire and water
souls immersed"
You have the touch, Lady.
Do so enjoy your work!
So nice of you to be here.

Krawdad
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