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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-05-27 11:06 AM

Remember Once Upon A Time

Remember those dreams
How they used to blend
Our thoughts lit colourful
We hoped to never end

Remember each fantasy
Enacting each escapade
Of colourful scenic hues
Caring heart’s displayed

Remember in the letters
The notes blending mine
Colourful words penned
Thoughts would entwine

Remember when writing
I was hoping you might
When once upon a time
Our dreams would unite

Remember all the times
Inspiring shore to shore
Floating on cloud nine
I was hoping evermore

Hope ©2001

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-05-27 11:10 AM

HopeS~
A nice remember for sure !
Good to see you this fine weekend !
Have a happy !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2001-05-27 11:24 AM

Really liked your poem HopeS.

Titia

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2001-05-29 12:13 PM

..sometimes it's hard to remember...good poem!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-05-29 06:09 AM

Wonderful write on memories...I enjoyed it very much!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-05-30 11:49 PM

Remember when writing
I was hoping you might
When once upon a time
Our dreams would unite

i especially enjoyed the flow of this stanza and the feel of the words

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

6 posted 2001-05-31 12:55 PM

Remembering is almost as great as being there once again! I enjoyed this!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

pamela08
Junior Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 27
California,USA

7 posted 2001-05-31 12:58 PM

i love your poem it was great..i love the message that it brings.....well done

true beauty comes from within not from without

Death
Member

since 2001-05-26

Posts 112
Twilight

8 posted 2001-05-31 02:33 AM

Singular in voice, universal in understanding. Well said.

I have a friend who once said-"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

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