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Mysteria
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~*~  Spirit Ghosts  ~*~

In the wake of waning wisdom,
There's a ghost that blocks my path,
Who seeks to hold my hand once more.
Who's terror sports a laugh.

Her hands are as cold as ice,
Her heart made out of stone,
She tries to beckon to me once more,
Not leaving well enough alone.

And I'm in no condition,
To resist an incantation wine,
Causing constant new perdition,
As she crawls into my mind.

Screaming out for intervention,
Seeking peace through my release,
But the spirit song, that holds me strong,
Forced upon my soul, a brand new crease.

So I shall venture to unknown waters,
As I hear the spirit wolf’s call,
And trust that my inner voice,
Will catch me if I fall.

This error is so long forgotten,
Purged out in utter desperate grief.
The biggest problem with a ghost,
Is that even death won't bring relief.


art: Jonathon Earl Bowser "Phantom of The Falls"
music: Elan Michaels "Starkeeper"

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
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Watersign6
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1 posted 05-27-2001 07:46 AM       View Profile for Watersign6   Email Watersign6   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watersign6's Home Page   View IP for Watersign6

well Mysteria let me be the first to say WOW! an Bravo! Love it an i mean i really do
Love it..so far every poem of yours ive read
has been just Amazing an Beautiful,your words flow so well,your one of my favorite poets here   also the visual is haunting an
beautiful too,all the images you've put with your poems have been wonderful.
dragonpoe
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2 posted 05-27-2001 07:48 AM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragonpoe

I absolutely love the picture! And the poem is chilling and superb, my kind of writing. Enjoyed it much.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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3 posted 05-27-2001 07:48 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Watersign6: the artist does all the work, I just put the frame on!  Thank you.
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4 posted 05-27-2001 09:13 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

dragonpoe: I liked the picture too, and I am glad you enjoyed this.
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5 posted 05-27-2001 09:15 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

...and you've framed it quite well.  This is indeed one of your better attempts...

something tells me, however, it will not be your last....

Have an excellent Sunday.  You've just added a glint to mine...
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6 posted 05-27-2001 09:40 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Fabulous write, enjoyed the read very much.
The pic. is one of my favourites from Jonathon's gorgeous work.

Charisma
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7 posted 05-27-2001 11:00 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mysteria~
Well ... just pick me up and plop me down in beauty ! !

The music is, of course, heavenly ...
the graphic devine and your poetry sublime.

Quite the Sunday morning combo !
Thank you, poetess.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 05-27-2001 01:30 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Sunshine: Thank you for your kind words.

Charisma: I do thank you and I love all of his work too.

Marge: Ifin I didn't know better, you was talkin rednic tak thar. But surnuf iffin I was to plop ya down it, wuld be in a pretty place ~ Thank you - you made my day with that comment! lol  
Martha Cowan
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9 posted 05-27-2001 11:01 PM       View Profile for Martha Cowan   Email Martha Cowan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Martha Cowan

Wowzers, Sharon!!!!!!!!!
This one completely mesmerized me!
You are just surrounding me with some of the most incredible work I've ever seen.  You are most awesome..sweet lady and cherished friend of mine!
Hugs and smiles to you, dawn

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Martha: Ah shucks, you make me blush!
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11 posted 04-21-2010 06:38 PM       View Profile for Laverne Pacquire   Email Laverne Pacquire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laverne Pacquire

I like this poem alot.
I like ghosts, I also like to write about them, on occasion.

Take care
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