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Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

0 posted 2001-05-27 06:48 AM


This poem has been removed.


© Copyright 2001 Jesse Jaymz - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-05-27 06:58 AM


Sad to see a poet that can write so well leave the rest of us. This is excellent writing!
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2001-05-27 07:14 AM


Jesse,
My heart bleeds for you, it's sad to see you go.
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



Marsha
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
3 posted 2001-05-27 08:26 AM


Jesse so sorry that you had to be broken up like this love. Its not fair its not right but it's life, and believe me you will rise again truly you will love.

Don't go too far away, maybe you will find solace in writing, I know I did. If this is the last time I ever see your name I shall be sorry. You are a fine writer

Take care love and warm stuff
                Mushy
                  
May He guide you and I pray He will keep you safe

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Victoria
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

4 posted 2001-05-27 10:43 AM


This isnt the first time you have been thru this jesse...time heals everything..and you should concentrate on your writing..but i know how you feel HUGS

                 ~Victoria~


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso


Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-27 12:33 PM


most return when they heal, you will....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


inot2B
Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
6 posted 2001-05-27 12:54 PM


Say it ain't so!

Don't let her stop you from writing and entertaining us.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2001-05-27 03:54 PM


Hey Jesse she just wasn't the right one for you...and that is a continual journey...to find a kindred spirit...looks like you're in the same boat as me...it always seems to be the next one...sorry it had to be like that for you this time...James
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

8 posted 2001-05-27 04:30 PM


Jesse,
I remember when you joined Passions, just a couple days after I did. You wandered in the Dark forum with your heart on your sleeve, back then you were nursing that broken heart and we watched you do so and heal through your poetry and giving yourself time to grow.
My point is... back then you thought you would never love again....and in time you did...
and gentle poet...you will again...
a very wise person once said...
"Never say Never"
take all the time you need...heal in your writing, whether you post it any where or not...
a poet is so because we write...not because we post in cyberspace.
I'm sorry your hurting like this...
and we see this time and time again on the internet...
its a hard lesson we ALL will learn in some way at one time or another.Its when we dont learn from the pain...that we will be hurt time and time again.
Trust me...Im a moth...I know.
Take care of you
JM

I'm hanging on your every word
Even if you dont want to speak tonite
It's alright
I'm sitting outside heaven's door
listening to you breathe

Sweeetsuz
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770
Fresno CA.
9 posted 2001-05-27 06:11 PM


Full of imagery and pain

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
10 posted 2001-05-27 07:20 PM


Jesse...life has it's disappointments and almost all on here  have had their share of them. Sometimes what one feels is love may have been the kind that was needed at the  time and you were not used but were the support, the shoulder, that met the emotional needs of another. I even enjoyed the way  you said this "you said that you needed time for your heart to heal" ...this may have felt like a lie to you but it seems to have been said in a caring way so as not to hurt you...even if it did.  I  am sorry you will leave us with  a loss of your words...they are after all, what is important on here...and all else on this site is secondary next to the pleasure we all receive from reading and sharing and understanding the emotions we all go through. Best wishes in whatever you decide..

~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

11 posted 2001-05-27 08:52 PM


"Whatever happens, I'll leave it all to chance
Another heartache, another failed romance
On and on, does anybody know what we are living for ?
I guess I'm learning (I'm learning learning learning)
I must be warmer now
I'll soon be turning (turning turning turning)
Round the corner now
Outside the dawn is breaking
But inside in the dark I'm aching to be free
The show must go on
The show must go on, yeah yeah
Ooh, inside my heart is breaking
My make-up may be flaking
But my smile still stays on"


I'm really into Queen now and this song has helped me through tough times. Hope it does the same for you, it's very powerful I think.
Good Luck, on with the show...

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
12 posted 2001-05-27 10:50 PM


Jesse, this is a heartfelt poem, and I am sorry to hear the words that show how broken your heart is. Don't give up, hun, life is horrid sometimes, and you know I have been there. But another miracle may be around the corner. I hope you keep writing, I believe it will help.
Sandra

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
13 posted 2001-05-28 10:33 AM


JES!!!  i havent even read the poem yet..(i want to!! but i'm being rushed out the door!)  but before i get rushed out..i just want to say.....dont let someone else rule your world!  you are the angel that flies with your wings baby..only you can dictate where you fly...so fly in freedom, and if you choose to fly away, we'll miss you.  if you choose to fly circles around she who tries to break you, we'll cheer for you!!  

i wish you'd stay, jes...

, g

the boy said, my name's johnny
and it might be a sin
but i'll take your bet
you're gonna regret
i'm the best there's ever been!
-cdaniels

vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
14 posted 2001-05-29 10:56 AM


sad that you're leaving us,but enjoy your poem as well
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