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pamela08 Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 27California,USA |
You mean the world to me Yet it scares me so much Maybe because i know its not meant to be Could something like this be such I feel you play with my emotions You seem to like that game Even though i give you all my devotion I am the one who ends up tamed So i guess this was just a trend Of two people who will never be friends I dont think you can say that i didnt try Just know that i will always love you but goodbye [This message has been edited by pamela08 (edited 05-27-2001).] |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
sometimes we have to say goodbye, and you communicate your need and reasoning well here. enjoyed and welcome to Passions. I am many. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
WOW, talk about pulling at the heartstring. I hope she wasn't playing mind games - everyone loses. My faith is but the size my mustard seed. I'll turn the other cheek in my love for mankind - not pride. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pamela~ Welcome to Passions !  No 'games' allowed on the playground of the heart ! Nice entry to this family of poets and friends. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
This is a wonderful poem. I look forward to reading more of your work. What you say here is said so perfectly!  I can't control |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
welcome to Passions an what a wonderful poem to start with,will be reading more of yours  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Pamela, Wonderful first post to Passions no games here looking forward to more of your work, welcome, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Nice write, welcome and become a friend Titia |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Welcome and here we will enjoy reading your emotions. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice and very honest ...quite refreshing *s welcome ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
welcome to Passions, this is heartfelt and honest, keep writing. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I liked this one and welcome to PIP! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Heartfelt write...from there you can't go wrong. Welcome and waiting for more from you! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to passions Pamela. Your poem had a refreshing honesty to it. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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