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Clippy" (Written w/ my daughter wayoutmelanie, age 4 (turned 5 since writing this)) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I am trying to teach Mel the concept of rhyme so she can be a great poetess like me. When she could, she came up with the rhyme and otherwise she told me what she thought ole "Clippy" was doing or looking like. (Clippy is the Microsoft Word helper dude) ~Clippy"~ Mr. Somethin-Funny the Paper Clip Had a magic carpet paper trip He colors the page with crayon chalk Clackety-clack is his only talk Moving his eyes and dancin’ a bit Doesn’t have a bottom, so he can’t sit Googley eyed crazy with painted in lashes Buggin me bad when his bulletin flashes Is that his nose or a great big smile Makin fun of me is not his style Mr. Paper Clip named Something-Funny Don’t sell yourself for endorsement money Squiggly red lines and ones colored green You’re our own teacher handsome, not mean I cannot mispell one single word Mr. Something-Funny your Voice is heard Mr. Something-Cute I wish you goodnight Thanks for helping us with this poem write! Mr. Something-Funny please be brave Don’t think we hate you cuz we didn’t save Ride off into the sunset on your bike Mr. Something-Funny you are who we like!  |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very cute, Walt and Melanie! I'm sure she'll turn out to be a wonderful writer. But Walt, I didn't know you were a poetess! Is there something we don't know about you?  hehe |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Just for Melanie: I like this poetess wayoutmelanie her rhymes sound familiar to me Seems wayoutwalt is daddy-poet this is the truth and we all know it. *** Cute poem you two!!! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o stoppit she helped alot You know if it was all me I woulda slamed Clippy hard!! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
too cute!  thanks for the smiles..and way to go, wayoutmel! hugs, g the boy said, my name's johnny |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well, wayoutmelanie... It looks to me like you've been teaching your daddy well... He's pretty good, you know - and your poem is GREAT...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Awwwwwwwwesome !  Yeayuhhhhhhh ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
what a great father you are..you should frame this one on her bedroom wall... ~Victoria~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, what a wonderful father you are! This is a treasure Kathleen Blake |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
how wonderful a poem is this an cute too i bet your very proud of your daughter |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A wonderful duo if ever I've seen, A father and daughter's superb writing team, Applause for the *grins*, for I'm smiling here lots, Every time I see "Clippy" ... I'll think "wayout" thoughts. This was a fun read Walt and Melanie, much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Mr. Crazy and Ms. Silly you have made something wacky! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Mr something-funny is soooo cute Hey Wayoutmelanie, way to go, keep writing honey. Wayoutwalt and Wayoutmelanie woohoo what a wayoutteam! loved it Maree |
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