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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-26 05:25 PM



    Reading Things In History

today I read a conversation in history
and who they spoke of was no mystery
it was about a princess they called spoiled
when I read it I recoiled
tears welled up as I read
I should have stopped, but I went ahead
now I write this with no angry ink
but I am pushed to my brink
some of what was said, didn’t have the facts straight
just went along in create
I copied it and sent it to a friend for safe keeping
in case I needed it later for repeating
this is the true glory
there are two moral’s to this story…….

Be careful what you write and what you have said
For you just don’t know by whom it may be read
and
Don’t clean up someone else’s house
When your house is a mess



"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 05-26-2001).]

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Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-05-26 08:05 PM


Nice write, but I keep believing in the good nature of the human race and sometimes it becomes easier to clean up your own mess after you've cleaned up someone else's house.

Titia

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2 posted 2001-05-26 08:10 PM


words to live by. . .

well written helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Watersign6
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3 posted 2001-05-26 08:41 PM


secong one ive read of yours an i loved both
your very good 1slicklady..  

JLR
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4 posted 2001-05-26 11:43 PM


Good lessons here...fortunately for me, I don't clean anyone's house, even my own.  Ha!
g-hm
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5 posted 2001-05-27 08:55 AM


Helen,
Sometimes finding things out on your own
are better for you. You learn more.
g-hm

2dalimit
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6 posted 2001-05-28 06:25 AM


Good one.
Melton

ethome
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7 posted 2001-05-28 06:51 AM


That's good advice in the ending and it carries the rest of the poem to a good conclusion!!  Good work!
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