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Open Poetry #14

poem - strange places

PoemCrazy
Member

since 2000-11-30

Posts 159

0 posted 2001-05-26 04:56 PM

do you ever wander?

no set destination,
just out the door,
and looking for a feeling
or a place that calls you.

have you seen any of
those quiet little corners
of nowhere -

where the air's electric,
colors seem different,
and your mind swims.

a little like waking up
in the shower when the hot stops.

strangely invigorating,
strangely aware.

almost uncomfortable,
almost not.

what would you call a place like that?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-05-26 05:21 PM

PoemCrazy~
WONDERFUL !

I have such a place -
I call it The meadow of my mind ...
I can retreat there on a wisp of will ...
and find serenity of thought.

Thanks for this piece of peace.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

2 posted 2001-05-26 09:05 PM

great read! enjoyed it very much

Death
Member

since 2001-05-26

Posts 112
Twilight

3 posted 2001-05-26 09:50 PM

I would call it a moment hitherto unexperienced.

My friend is saying a possible Epiophanous moment. He wants to know, did you learn anythng? I will have to look that one up. Well two definitions for are likely better than one.

Your humble servant

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