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Rainbow Blessing's |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Rainbow Blessing's Raindrops falling down Upon my wanting soul As I stand mid field Where wild flowers grow Alone I am not for given Freely Mother Nature provides All for these wanting eyes Lifting weightiness of my burden Bounty found in nectar sweet As birds and bee’s come out to eat Rain-washes away all impurities Displaying beautiful colored pansies Lessons lilies teach me No toil or spin in their dance Power retained in fragile stance Even if sun’s rays out of reach In my heart feeling refreshed I becoming completely enmeshed With nature providing tranquillity To a wearied soul needing amity Rainbow arched across nature’s rein Blessing my spirit with no refrain Learning to open wide my heart To the beauty nature so imparts Now it’s just a question of when This happy little soul will leave Cause I’m truly enjoying with glee Dancing with birds and bees By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Cerenity,WOW! love this poem,you are good!  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful refreshing piece. Excellent writing. Poeminister |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Rainbow arched across nature’s rein Blessing my spirit with no refrain Learning to open wide my heart To the beauty nature so imparts" Ah Cerenity ... from one nature lover to another, this was a much needed and wonderfully refreshing stroll with you, much enjoyed these sentiments today! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Such a refreshing drink of rainbowed hue caught within the ink of you. Lovely, sweet little poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written indeed cerenity, enjoyed well done~Victoria~
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
your words even make this dreary day glow beautiful images and even if it is raining here the view is still beautiful. Bounty found in nectar sweet As birds and bee’s come out to eat Rain-washes away all impurities Displaying beautiful colored pansies "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
This sounds like a place I would love to go. You have taken me there in my mind and made my body long to go. Enjoyed. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is really really beautiful! I enjoyed this. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
dance on my friend. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi, All of you are so sweet, I have really had to fight with my writing lately, just does not flow out so easy, so thank you for your kind replys, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Rainbow arched across nature’s rein Blessing my spirit with no refrain Learning to open wide my heart To the beauty nature so imparts beautifully done.....love it Cerenity ((hugs)) Charisma |
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