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Essence of the Day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Essence of the Day The night holds essence of the day That adds bouquet to what we think. And as we lay and dream away It forms a sort of interlink. It brings in symbols mixed admire Without the shackles of awake It brings to life minds desire Within a fantasies remake It’s the wellspring and the flower Another life another store With rejuvenating power To kill the dragon at the door It turns the stars to wholesome awesome And beauties butterflies to fly Adding color to our phantoms And surceases forever’s lie It’s a hoaxer and a coaxer And an aspirin for the tragic An elixir and a fixer With an orphic in the magic And I recommend it highly For the clever and the wily. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Seymour! Very well written, as always! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sy....good! This brought to my mind that moment when a whiff of scent sends one back in time to a special moment and, for a brief, incandescent wink of time, smile at the memory... Ah Sy...good, very good! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"It’s a hoaxer and a coaxer And an aspirin for the tragic An elixir and a fixer With an orphic in the magic" Excellent Seymour! I loved your thoughts in this ... dreamland is whatever we make of it indeed. Loved the tongue twisting internal rhymes above, great writing!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The night holds essence of the day That adds bouquet to what we think. And as we lay and dream away It forms a sort of interlink. It brings in symbols mixed admire Without the shackles of awake It brings to life minds desire Within a fantasies remake ================================= It turns the stars to wholesome awesome And beauties butterflies to fly Adding color to our phantoms And surceases forever’s lie It’s a hoaxer and a coaxer And an aspirin for the tragic An elixir and a fixer With an orphic in the magic And I recommend it highly For the clever and the wily. ================================== Even when you sleep ... wisdom brews  and I have always said I bet you when you talk in your sleep ...you speak in rhyme divine OH how I love this clever cadenced kissed poem ... but that one verse makes me wonder???? kill the dragon at the door??? NAH ... let Randy soar we all know hes really harmless *winkiewinkie*  meI'm hanging on your every word |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you for the read and comp, I missed you. *L* Sunshine, What would I do without my daily sunshine? *L* Sy Kit, Thank you my friend, I enjoyed your comment very much. JM, You know there are good dragons and bad dragons. Randy's right on the boarder line. LOL. And now that I've hade my cup of raspberry flattery. I'll have a wonderful day Love winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'It brings in symbols mixed admire Without the shackles of awake It brings to life minds desire Within a fantasies remake' I MUST be dreaming ! But one thing I know for sure - in my sleep I sense the lure You are a poet for all time - with lovely cadence in your rhyme A dandy little Randy, sweet as sweet can be, Dream on dear poet ... in rhymes of glee ! *Hugging* you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Absolutely love you too. Sy |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Sweet word mixer. I love your writing. I am many. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Siofra, Thank you so much for the read and lovely comment. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Seymour...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love your wonderful thoughts....thank you for sharing.....superb Charisma |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy..If you recommend it, I think I'll try it...with a little wily on the side. Loved the poem! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you James. Charisma, Thank you for the like. Martie, Be careful of wily, it can come on a little strong. LOL *L* |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wonderful weaving of words "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Brian, Nice you to read and comment. |
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