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bslicker
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0 posted 2001-05-26 02:40 AM



  

Evening Coast

Looking out
over the beach
Onto waters
of the gulf coast
Watching the moon
glisten on the waves
of the evening.
As the tide recedes
from the white sands
leaving remains
of shells from
pounding force.
The leaves
of the palms
ever so singing
beating it's own tune
to the wind.



Bernie

       


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker


[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 05-26-2001).]

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Paula Finn
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1 posted 2001-05-26 02:45 AM


Oh you make it sound so inviting...I cant wait to see for myself....
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2 posted 2001-05-26 10:34 AM


Nice poem, better picture, where is this?
forevernbluejeans
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3 posted 2001-05-26 02:25 PM


Your making me dream of a vacation LOL...this is very good Bernie
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4 posted 2001-05-26 02:36 PM


A perfect moment in time captured Bernie ... I can almost hear the sounds of the surf from here, much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2001-05-26 02:48 PM


Bernie....You are at your best in nature's moments...this is a wonderful, peaceful meditation. Wonderful!  
Saunni
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6 posted 2001-05-26 03:41 PM


This is so beautiful! I really loved this! Can't wait to go also.  

Sauni

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7 posted 2001-05-26 03:43 PM


Lovely picture with lovely words to describe it.

I am many.

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missouri
8 posted 2001-06-01 01:51 AM


This was so inviting I just had to visit again...mmmmm to be sitting on that beach...Im past ready Bernie...
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