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Aurora Borealis (Choka) |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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Shining with allure in psychedelic brilliance. ruby ,emerald and azure coalescence glow iridescent mysteries light writhing in dance swiftly they come and they go sweeping ebony shimmering serpents casting mysterious dance flirting with the sky insinuating color bold, with every sweeping arch  Aloha with warmest regards, Koko Please Visit my new web-page http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111 [This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 05-26-2001).] |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
this makes me wish i lived where the northern lights showed up occasionally. -Napalm I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful.....and the pic is awesome KoKo. Charisma |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
It’s truly an awesome sight Nature’s show at night Aurora Borealis Colorful shades of light I viewed it while stationed in Alaska in the Army. Thanks. Melton |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful imagery, I will to put the northern lights on my things to see before I die list. "across the unfair divide |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
your use of language here is excellent. . . "psychedelic brilliance", "azure coalescence", "iridescent mysteries". . . I love those. . . they make it seem real. . . even without the picture. . . wonderful!! -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully descriptive Koko! It's such a marvel to watch, you've captured this spectacular scene very nicely, well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Wel < 2dalimit..you were very fortunate to experience seeing this phenomena of nature. I have not ever seen it ,but wish i had. I wrote from beautiful pictures of it. thankd for commenting .....smiles brian madden: wel I wish I could say the same ,but I know it is not posible for me to see these lovely lights. thanks for your kind words sven: smile atcha, I am a "word woman" LOL and it is what makes the nature in haiku poetry come alive. It is quite a challenge to perform a haiku would not do this phenomena justice so it had to be the choka thanks for your wonderful kindness to me and your encouraging comments. The muse is yet in a real struggle to pen. I someimes wonder if I ever will get another poem written ever again and then one comes thru. take care and write on , my friend Kit: you must live where you can see this marvel. wow how awesome that must be. Thanks for your encouragement and comment. That is an honor from a lady whom I so admire in her poetry and style. write on! Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ My goodness ... what a lovely piece. The phrasing does the picture justice. You are just wonderful in your portrayal in this form. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Koko, this is beautiful, and thank you so much for sharing the beautiful picture. Hugs On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Cherie such awesome imagery in this! You painted a marvelous vision for me tonight~Take care, Melissa~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 excellent! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ Just wondering how and where you are ... and hoping you'll come once more to PiP's blue shore~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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