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Aurora Borealis (Choka)

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KokoStewartKoomoa
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Shining  with allure
in psychedelic brilliance.
ruby ,emerald and
azure coalescence glow
iridescent mysteries

light writhing in dance
swiftly they come and they go
sweeping ebony

shimmering serpents
casting  mysterious dance
flirting with the sky
insinuating color
bold, with every sweeping arch




Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 05-26-2001).]

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1 posted 05-26-2001 01:51 AM       View Profile for NapalmsConstantlyConfused   Email NapalmsConstantlyConfused   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NapalmsConstantlyConfused

this makes me wish i lived where the northern lights showed up occasionally.
-Napalm

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2 posted 05-26-2001 04:22 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

beautiful.....and the pic is awesome KoKo.

Charisma

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The Northern Sky light
Itís truly an awesome sight
Natureís show at night
Aurora Borealis
Colorful shades of light



I viewed it while stationed in Alaska in the Army. Thanks.
Melton
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beautiful imagery, I will to put the northern lights on my things to see before I die list.

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where black will never meet white
so read my token lips
as though they never exist"

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your use of language here is excellent. . .
"psychedelic brilliance", "azure coalescence", "iridescent mysteries". . . I love those. . . they make it seem real. . . even without the picture. . .

wonderful!!

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Beautifully descriptive Koko!  It's such a marvel to watch, you've captured this spectacular scene very nicely, well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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Wel < 2dalimit..you were very fortunate to experience seeing this phenomena of nature. I have not ever seen it ,but wish i had. I wrote from beautiful pictures of it. thankd for commenting .....smiles

brian madden: wel I wish I could say the same ,but I know it is not posible for me to see these lovely lights. thanks for your kind words

sven: smile atcha, I am a "word woman" LOL
and it is what makes the nature in haiku poetry come alive. It is quite a challenge to perform a haiku would not do this  phenomena justice so it had to be the choka thanks for your wonderful kindness to me and your encouraging comments. The muse is yet in a real struggle to pen. I someimes wonder if I ever will get another poem written ever again and then one comes thru.
take care and write on , my friend

Kit: you must live where you can see this marvel. wow how awesome that must be. Thanks for your encouragement and comment. That is an honor from a lady whom I so admire in her poetry and style.  write on!

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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KoKo~
My goodness ... what a lovely piece.
The phrasing does the picture justice.
You are just wonderful in your portrayal in this form.
~*Marge*~

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Koko, this is beautiful, and thank you so much for sharing the beautiful picture.  Hugs

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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Cherie   such awesome imagery in this!  You painted a marvelous vision for me tonight~

Take care,
Melissa~
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excellent!
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KoKo~
Just wondering how and where you are ... and hoping you'll come once more to PiP's blue shore~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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