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0 posted 2001-05-25 11:27 PM


Rainbow Dancer’s Serenade Of The Ocean
By: Noah Eaton
12/20/00

“Silky waves of your breath kisses the shores of my heart, blanketing the dry sands of my heart with your sweet love
The waves flow gently, cradled tidal waves, forever embracing my soul with the comfort of your love
Together, we sail away from this harbor of reality to a magical sea of love that our hearts unveil
I smell the balmy, rose ocean mist of your heart, which swims in my head softly with loves pleasurable whisper

Dive with me into this lovely barrier reef of wonders, where the sands are made of pure gold and the water tastes of sweet juices
Where the creatures of the sea sing in harmony and politesse with the mermaids who sing songs as angelically as the angels
We dive into each others hearts, sharing the love we have for each other, as our hearts begin to blend together
Silhouettes of your lovely soul swim throughout my heart, singing words of love that open my heart to yours

Like an undertode that cuddles me gently and tenderly, you hold me in your arms, taking me to the ocean of your heart
We slowly melt in the waters of each others hearts, as all the beauty of love fills us with it’s passion and sweet serenity
I hold your hand dearly, as I submerge with you deep into the sea of love, through the aquamarine painted waters
I hold you in my arms as we touch the sands of the bottom of our hearts together, surrounded by the art of rainbow coral and pearly ocean rocks, reflecting loves light everywhere

I watch as your hair waves in the water, small wisps gently brushing against my shoulders, caressing me like the soft ocean breeze
Your hair reflects the colors of the sea, waving back and forth with charm, alluring all the lovely creatures of this magical place
As we sigh together of love, bubbles that breath from our mouths float gently upward to the shore, changing colors constantly, flickering golden light of love as they ascend
Deep in the waters of our hearts, we never suffocate, we are free in each others love, breathing in total joy and comfort

I look into your beautiful eyes, shimmering a bright light that fills my heart with great love and affection
Softly, I touch you, your skin is so moist and smooth, a feeling much more lovely than anything I could possibly ever imagine
I hold you close to me as your lips meet mine, a magic kiss that emits a magical colorful light that slowly spreads across this ocean of love
Shimmering brightness, soft clouds of dancing bubbles, sweet songs from the creatures of the sea all happen at once, with one sweet kiss from your sweet loving lips

Even as we live together in this harbor of reality, there is no place as lovely as home, deep in each others hearts
As we sit on the beaches of our love together and watch the sun set, I hold you close to me, as the shadows of our love soar across the waters
I will always be there for you, love, your eyes have everything I want to see, you are everything to me…
We will always be together, as we continue to swim into each others hearts, kissing each others hearts with our love…

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1 posted 2001-05-25 11:41 PM


skin diving was excellent. I always enjoy a poem penned with metaphors about the ocean.. lovey write! Aloha, Koko
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2 posted 2001-05-25 11:52 PM


Thank you so much for your encouraging and beautiful comment!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-05-30 08:44 AM


how could I missed this one, love the diving.
Lovely piece and I enjoyed the read very much.

Charisma

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