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insect
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0 posted 2001-05-25 08:32 PM





When I hold you and you hold me too
And if I’m scared and feeling blue
Sing those words I love to hear
I love you…in my ear

When the blanket of night covers our hearts
And reveals the lovers and all their parts
Touch me soft with kisses so wet
Like the touch of a time when we first met

When the years of love pass like the sun
And our age shows but we still have fun
Lets laugh together like we always do
Sharing this happiness just me and you



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with you
1 posted 2001-05-25 09:02 PM


oh   this is sweet....Lois likes.... a lot  
Alan
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2 posted 2001-05-25 09:25 PM


I like this alot....
Victoria
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3 posted 2001-05-25 10:16 PM


lovely insect...very sweet words..

              ~Victoria~

JLR
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4 posted 2001-05-26 02:23 AM


Love applause!
latin passion
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5 posted 2001-05-26 02:50 AM


Wonderful read, even possibly dreamy. Hope you find her.
Paula Finn
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missouri
6 posted 2001-05-26 03:16 AM


awwwwwwwwwww...so sweet
Charisma
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lost in blue pages
7 posted 2001-05-26 03:43 AM


*sigh* love it.....so sweet....beautiful

Charisma

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8 posted 2001-05-27 03:13 AM


beautiful..
and where have you been I wonder?

I am many.

pamela08
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9 posted 2001-05-27 03:16 AM


incredible...wonderful poem that is very touching
insect
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10 posted 2001-05-27 03:35 PM


Lois…Is there any way you can reach Superman?!
           There’s a meteor flying towards Earth at a
           tremendous speed that is capable of wiping
           out civilization as we know it…. Oh!..Wait
           Damn!…Sorry!..my mistake it’s that damn
           kid next-door throwing rocks again!

Alan…Thanks for liking
            Glad you dropped in to say so

Victoria…Thanks Victoria…sweet words for a sweet reader!

JLR…Thank you
           Very interesting reply…had me thinking about it!
            Love it!
            Thanks again

latin passion…”dreamy”
                        Nice to hear a beautiful response like this
                        Thank you

Paula Finn…Thank you Paula
                      Always pleasures to hear from you
                      You are the storm of!

Charisma…Your “*sighs*” always put smiles on my face
                    Thank you

Siofra…Under the covers!…Ha!
              Thank you

WELCOME
TO
PASSIONS


pamela08…Glad it touched you
                    Thank you

WELCOME
TO
PASSIONS


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