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walker
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0 posted 2001-05-25 06:44 PM



We must have known,
that this love would not last,
for it had all the signs
We loved desperately,
but didn't take the time to think how we loved and why?
We must have known,
that our passion would dissolved
We speed up the length of wanting regretting it afterwards
We must have known,
but we fail to realize that love needs time and that we never had.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 05-25-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-05-25 07:26 PM


If uou had known, you wouldn't have shared this beautiful poem with me today.

Always love your writing.

Titia

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-05-25 08:27 PM


sometimes we go through it even knowing.....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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3 posted 2001-05-25 08:56 PM


wow. . . I love what this says walker. . .

excellent. . .

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JLR
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4 posted 2001-05-26 01:39 AM


Time isn't always on our side, it seems.
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5 posted 2001-05-26 02:24 AM


walker,

    Admitting the passion has passed by is one of the hardest things to do. Wonderful write.  

TaraB

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6 posted 2001-05-26 04:14 AM


time isn't always on our side.....but if needed we must take some time.

love it.

Charisma

Watersign6
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7 posted 2001-06-05 02:09 PM


very good and i am enjoying your poems so much,keep writing  
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8 posted 2001-06-05 02:27 PM


(sad sigh) I am so very sorry you've felt this way, for you deserve to be loved so very much and it breaks my heart to see this love didn't have enough time and has become clouded. (sad sigh) Oh gosh, I hope this isn't a current feeling, but if it is, remember that we are all here for you and your golden heart should have no problem finding true love you so much deserve! (big hugggsssss) sad but very beautiful, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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