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The Pen's Seduction
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The Pen's Seduction |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beckoned from the dead of night to lift you to my cheek Softly I hear the promise you make my words are what you seek You offer ink obsidian upon paper of creamed hue Together we create a world that's magical and new Smiling now, I begin to write as you glide across paper's face Together, pen and poet we leave this earthly place |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Mind if I follow you? I could use an excursion like this myself...  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
no doubt. . . but, do you mind if I only hitchhike? I want to go somewhere else. . .  great one deVine. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brava! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
We have become so use to clicking on a keyboard, that sometimes we forget how exciting forming the letters with a pen can be. [This message has been edited by inot2B (edited 05-25-2001).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I agree....I took a challenge to write about how 'seductive' writing can be.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Can I follow? pleaseeee Sharon , hon a very lovely poem you have penned my dear Maree |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wonderful look into the poet's mind! Kathleen Blake |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Perfection, Mizz P! Love the meter, and the second stanza particularly! You describe it perfectly! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wooohooo Sharon! Made my night!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ Well-crafted thoughts. 'You offer ink obsidian upon paper of creamed hue Together we create a world that's magical and new' That's really pretty ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you!!!! I'm so glad you like this.. and Marge..that one verse was the hardest to write for some reason.... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
With or without pen, I'm out there with you, dear poet friend. Loved this one Liz |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sharon, You've done an excellent job with this one, and done us an excellent honor to be able to read such beauty. I love this one. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I almost always write with pen and paper...even in this day and age of computers...its just somehow so much more satisfying....this is lovely |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
so dreamy of a write. Waiting for the book |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yeah pen's seduction, can merge within. Wonderful penned....as always. Charisma |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
There is something so comforting to hand-writing poetry, as I do all the family ones by hand. This was awesome, standing ovation to you on this one! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
this is a truely beautiful poem,i am in awe of your writing,i am off to look for more of yours now |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i write on the pc..i cant understand my writing..haa...loved it Ms. Devine. ~Victoria~
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully flowing Sharon ... a lovely place you've travelled to in writing this lyrical piece, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
You offer ink obsidian upon paper of creamed hue Together we create a world that's magical and new beautiful poem on the magic that poem can weave. Wish my key board could soar maybe I should invest in a writing set. "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, that's wonderful when that happens, isn't it, Sharon? Great expression! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh my! How could I have missed this one?! This is peacefully simple and beautiful, with that flair that only you possess. Mind if I join you? Actually, I go there often when I read great poetry of yours and others Take care, Melissa~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful Sharon...I've found I need to work on my penmanship though...and how to spell again..without my pal "Spell Check". |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
PDV , The page that beckons , the pen held poised, together they shut out the noise .What will appear ? It's magic true , and why we do this thing we do . Nice thoughts here . Doc |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Beckoned from the dead of night to lift you to my cheek Softly I hear the promise you make my words are what you seek You offer ink obsidian upon paper of creamed hue Together we create a world that's magical and new Smiling now, I begin to write as you glide across paper's face Together, pen and poet we leave this earthly place ---------------- I read it earlier and thought I've commented about it but I guess I was too much in a hurry to do so........ and now I read it again and enjoyed it again There is just such a lovely magical connection between a writer and his pen and papers........in many ways they are his best friends......... My pen and papers tolerate my madness.......my raging seas or quite lakes and keep all my words a treasure locked and kept....... Thank you for a lovely read and expressing it so well on behalf of alot of us  ************************* It's only me.......only me |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
So beautiful the expression weaved in your poem... I truly enjoyed this splendid read... Thank you PoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sharon, This is wonderful, you captured a writers thoughts so perfectly, you are very gifted, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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