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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-25 04:07 PM



    Indulge Me

sitting here I wonder
how your skin
would feel against mine
shall you touch patiently
could you take your time
can you listen tenderly
to a heart’s voice
or give into passion
would that be your choice
this time indulge me
with feathered motion
as I ride the waves
of your peaceful ocean
breathlessly now listen
to my heart beat
as bodies unite
melt and meet
arrested in this moment
enjoying each shiver
in the total pleasures
each touch delivers
yes each time we touch
it is restyled
next time I’ll lose my breath
with you intense and wild

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
latin passion
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1 posted 2001-05-25 05:45 PM


WOW what a visual. great poem, in my private library this will go.
S Arthur Grey
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2 posted 2001-05-25 08:36 PM


Oh my!
Other words escape me just now.
I'll be back after I catch my breath.

S Arthur

. . . Hills jump with brooks.
trees tumble out of twigs and sticks;
e e cummings

Alan
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3 posted 2001-05-25 08:58 PM


I really like this. enjoyed it alot
JLR
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4 posted 2001-05-26 12:59 PM


A toast then...to the next time,and the next, and the next.  
NapalmsConstantlyConfused
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5 posted 2001-05-26 01:38 AM


my blessings, and i hope you have as much fun as it looks like you are, hehehe. ~leers evilly~
-Napalm

I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

rosepetals25
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6 posted 2001-05-26 02:09 AM


1slick_lady,

       Beautifully written! How romantic and sensual

TaraB

LAA
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7 posted 2001-05-27 10:24 AM




     Intriguing, romantic and more.

LAA

Cerenity
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8 posted 2001-05-27 10:36 AM


Hi Slick Lady,

Senual indeed, wonderful imagery as well, enjoyed very much,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2001-05-27 11:26 AM


'this time indulge me
with feathered motion
as I ride the waves
of your peaceful ocean'


OneSlickLady ... yes, you are ! !
LOVE IT !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Jaime Fradera
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10 posted 2001-05-28 10:49 PM


As I read,
you Rock me!
you MOAN me!
you Send me
in rolling, swelling waves
of raw delight
and primal pleasure,
in spasms of ultimate expression
to the Land where fantasy is Real
to the place where love incarnate
lives eternal ...

again ...
again ...
again! ...
Jaime


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