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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

0 posted 2001-05-25 03:32 PM

Your quiet beauty
Whispers on the breeze
With fragrance sweet
As you spread your
Feathery green canopy

Your beauty does
Not shout
But grows
More precious
With each passing breeze

Upon your lacy umbrella
Your silky coral powder puffs
Allure, softly
Quietly and unseen
Your charms hidden
To the casual passerby

Eloquently and silently
Your beauty grows
In the eyes of those
Who have the time to sit
Nearby
Watching what magic
Can be performed
By Mimosa
And a southern breeze

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2001-05-25 03:37 PM

Very lovely songbird...enjoyed you words

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-25 04:02 PM

wonderful pen and smells so sweet.

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-05-25 06:14 PM

probably more than we know. . .

loved this one Songbird. . . made me feel like I was right there. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-05-25 08:58 PM

SongBird~
You describe this beauty PERFECTLY !

What a treasure you've shared.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-05-25 10:41 PM

Yes, they even grow this lovely....in Kansas....

a wonderful rendition!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2001-05-26 09:34 AM

This is very beautiful! You've painted a lovely picture with your words!

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-05-26 09:37 AM

Beautiful imagery Songbird ... I very much enjoyed these lovely visuals this morning, nicely written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

8 posted 2001-05-26 03:22 PM

Thanks for all your kind comments and for the beautiful photo, Marge. Bees really enjoy these lovely tree also. I had never heard of Mimosa till I moved to the south.

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

9 posted 2001-05-27 03:10 AM

The mimosa whispers beautifully as does your poetry. I love your nature work.

I am many.

pamela08
Junior Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 27
California,USA

10 posted 2001-05-27 03:14 AM

how you write is so beautiful.....you make it so one feels that they are there...fascinating work

angelbear
Member

since 2001-05-22

Posts 139
North East, USA

11 posted 2001-05-27 05:56 AM

Eloquently and silently
Your beauty grows
In the eyes of those
Who have the time to sit
Nearby
Watching what magic
Can be performed
By Mimosa
And a southern breeze

Such a breathtaking picture you paint...beautiful..

I can't control
my destiny
I trust my soul,
my only goal
is just to "be"
-Lyrics from RENT

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

12 posted 2001-06-11 10:26 PM

Glad you all enjoyed this.. I enjoyed writing it.. the south inspires me so..especially at this time of year.

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