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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-05-25 01:03 PM



loving forever
never knowing you by rote
ah, discovery

and you responding
like your first experience
breathlessly giving

loving you anew
each exploration of you
as though uncharted

together, we two
alone, only half of us
together, as one

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-05-25 01:42 PM


This is lovely....and familiar....
Paula Finn
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2 posted 2001-05-25 01:56 PM


This is beautiful
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with you
3 posted 2001-05-25 06:58 PM


incomplete apart
soul to soul ~ a perfect fit
we were meant to be


~SEA

Poeminister
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4 posted 2001-05-25 07:33 PM


Beautiful senryu. Most gracefully done.

PM

2dalimit
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5 posted 2001-05-25 07:49 PM


together, we two
alone, only half of us
together, as one


Love it.
Melton

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6 posted 2001-05-27 06:56 PM


Beautiful.
Irish Rose
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7 posted 2001-05-27 07:25 PM


lovely job you've done on this one
Panne447
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8 posted 2001-05-30 01:49 PM


This is a terific Senyru- thanks for sharing this- it is lovely. Panne
Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2001-05-30 02:33 PM


Yes I like that so much.
It's such fun to write senryus, haikus or even acrostics. Thanks for sharing.

Titia

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Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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10 posted 2001-05-30 03:24 PM


beautiful senryus.....love it

Charisma

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