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Michael G
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Nashville

0 posted 2001-05-25 12:26 PM


to those of us who understood
those tests we passed in time
the endless march through the woods
or through the muck and grime
we wore a simply uniform
one that really did not fit
one that would not keep you warm
nor cool when the heat hit
we learned to kill for country
how to take anothers life
how to defeat an unseen enemy
in the dark of the night
I went on to be an engineer
the kind the builds and destroys
I learned how to use demolitions
and how to build homes
I trained others about mines
those little *******s in the ground
how to find them carefully
and then how to blow them up
We carried your flag for you
and then came home to this
a life a little boring
considering where we had been
We carried your flag for you
you praised us for a day
then turned around to get rid of us
like guard dogs on parade
We carried your flag for you
but would have rather stayed at home
for when you cannot handle things
you always send us along
We carried our dead for you
and never heard you weep
next time think before sending us out
for they never really sleep.

© Copyright 2001 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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Arkansas
1 posted 2001-05-25 12:39 PM


Yes you are right, your country turned his back on you after you did as they requested. The promise given to our soldiers each day is being taken away.
To you I send my deepest appreciation for all you did.

Marina
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Pickering, Ontario
2 posted 2001-05-25 12:52 PM


This really makes one stop and think.  Being Canadian, we don't have such issues as you guys deal with.  But I would hope that it would not stop us from appreciating people such as yourself for what you have sacrificed.  This is a wonderful piece Michael.

Marina

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-05-25 01:06 PM


Yes we did ... except it was OUR flag ... our and theirs.

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4 posted 2001-05-25 01:55 PM


Thank you for this, Michael.  Some of us do remember, and thank you again for all that you, and yours, have done.
Paula Finn
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missouri
5 posted 2001-05-25 02:08 PM


No not all of us have forgotten...but it never hurts to be reminded...so thank you Michael...thank you for all you gave...for all you still give...

Watersign6
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Hurricane,WV
6 posted 2001-05-25 02:20 PM


your poem is so well written i can picture
everything all the images you write about
thank you for telling it like it is an making us remember all who have served an all who are still serving.

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7 posted 2001-05-26 02:10 PM


I am not American, and can not even imagine what being in a war must be like, but I know you sure have written of those who do and well too, as my heart goes out to you all.  What a wonderful poem for your hoiday.

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State of Suspended Passion
8 posted 2001-05-27 03:03 AM


It angers me that anyone of you were ever taken for granted.
Well done expression here.
Enjoyed.

I am many.

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
9 posted 2001-05-27 03:08 AM


I thank you for defending our flag and salute your bravery. I hope you read "The boys who fought".
Liz

angelbear
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since 2001-05-22
Posts 139
North East, USA
10 posted 2001-05-27 04:02 AM


You are rightly honered and not forgotten by all. The pain of some experieces can never die, this I know first hand. Thank you for all you did.

I can't control
my destiny
I trust my soul,
my only goal
is just to "be"
-Lyrics from RENT

2dalimit
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Mississippi coast
11 posted 2001-05-27 06:35 AM


I salute you, sir.
Melton

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