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spiked
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since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2001-05-25 12:23 PM

The varied thoughts of where and when
Solutions sought that we pretend.
To answer questions tucked away
Hidden in the words we say.
No scholar does it take to see.
All questions twist inside of me.
Where did I turn? Did I go wrong?
Should have used my words instead of song.
For not all know what I imply.
Bend my words, Logic defy.
A complicated web I weave
For life has left me to believe.
There is no destined path to take.
This journey here is what we make.
We need not ask if right or wrong.
and ponder on these thoughts too long.
That takes us back to where and when.
Where we all hide in some pretend.
Escape in some romantic dream.
Where dreams are all just as they seem.
Just Dreams.

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 05-27-2001).]

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2001-05-25 12:50 PM

I enjoyed this!! Was excellent in verse and meter....and sometimes the dream is just a dream..is just a dream...is just a..well..you get my point.

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2001-05-25 02:06 PM

Hi Spiked,

This is perfect, loved every word of it, wonderful, wonderful.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-05-25 02:13 PM

and what's wrong with dreams? hmmmm??? (tapping my toe and dropping ashes onto my keyboard---) I DID like this one--I just tend to overanalyze everything! But nice flow to it here...glad you're writing again.

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

4 posted 2001-05-26 07:23 AM

Excellent piece of poetry. And sooo true- every word.
Melton

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

5 posted 2001-05-26 07:59 AM

this was a really good read an very enjoyable
too,i will have to add you to my list of favorites on here

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

6 posted 2001-05-26 09:46 AM

"A complicated web I weave
For life has left me to believe.
There is no destined path to take.

Escape in some romantic dream.
Where dreams are all just as they seems.
Just Dreams".

I think that we can all relate each and every word of this poem.
wonderful flow, but you know some dreams do become real.

"you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-05-26 09:52 AM

Excellent Spiked! Oh how I love to ponder these very thoughts. You've captured this beautifully with wonderful cadence and rhyme, really well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Siofra

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since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

8 posted 2001-05-27 03:05 AM

Things to think upon from your wonderful pen.
enjoyed.

I am many.

spiked
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since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

9 posted 2001-05-27 10:13 AM

To have been read is a wonder, To have been understood is a pleasure.
Thanks
Rich

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