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2dalimit
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0 posted 2001-05-25 05:31 AM


My love is released
Satisfaction through and through
I’m in love with you

[This message has been edited by 2dalimit (edited 05-25-2001).]

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angelswing
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1 posted 2001-05-25 11:59 AM


Short and sweet, just the way I like it . I like the way you have managed to actualy get a very major feeling into just three lines . Brilliant .
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Poet deVine
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2 posted 2001-05-26 11:33 AM


Sometimes saying 'I love you' in short verse is best..goes RIGHT to the point.  
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