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Sven
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0 posted 2001-05-24 09:21 PM


in the sight
of your words

we see the light,
the light that
shines over the
ocean of your life
the dawning
and the sunset

we see the darkness,
the darkness that
shrouds even the
most beautiful
of paradises,
even this Eden

in the sight
of your words
we see the darkness
we see the light
we see your heart

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-05-24 10:26 PM


Koko is one special lady, thank you for this tribute to her
Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-05-25 12:09 PM


Wonderful tribute to a beautiful poet.  Nicely done.

Poeminister

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3 posted 2001-05-25 02:14 AM


beautiful...with lovely images through words...i really liked this poem sven...thanks for sharing it...and until next time...i'll be waiting

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

KokoStewartKoomoa
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4 posted 2001-05-25 11:15 PM


I don't what what to say..I am feeling pretty special and overwhelmed that you would do this for me. It really touches my heart deeply... and at a time when I needed something most. Life has been really rough. If I were within reach you'd have a big xoxo and warm smiles to express my gratitude for your wonderful talent being penned in a tribute to me. And a cup of Kona Coffee with a passionfruit whipped cream puff pastry... LOL~
God bless you, Sven hugs and warm aloha, Koko

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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5 posted 2001-05-26 12:44 PM


Another beautiful portrait of another beautiful person. You've done well, Beautiful Heart.  

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6 posted 2001-05-26 04:27 AM


wonderful tribute for a gorgeous poet.
you captured her very well

Charisma

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7 posted 2001-05-26 05:29 AM


Sven, your poem depicted Koko to a "T", and there is no one on God's earth worth noticing than her.  I am so glad she got recognized for the talent she is, for she is the "Haiku Queen", "Queen of the Islands", and the "Queen of our Hearts", hugs honey...you deserved this.

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
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Sven
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8 posted 2001-05-26 09:52 AM


Irish Rose, you are most welcome, and thank you for reading. . .

Poeminister, thank you my friend, glad that you enjoyed. . .

albert, as always, thank you for reading. . . it's nice to know that you're enjoying this. . .  

Temptress, you're right, they're all beautiful, wonderful people, thank you. . .  

Charisma, thank you my friend, I do try. . .

Mysteria, thank you. . . I am very happy to do this. . . and knowing that I got it right makes it even more worthwhile. . .

Koko, my friend, you honor me with your words. . . I am glad to bring a little something into your life. . . and thanks for the coffee and pastry, a couple of my favorites!!     Thank you for sharing your words with us, please continue to do so, we will enjoy every one of them. . .

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