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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-05-24 09:18 PM


The numbers mean interaction for me, my friends. I place value on the fact that I've been blessed to be able to interact even this small amount on such wonderful boards..surrounded by such wonderful friends..and an all consuming infectious passion.
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The dust settles as I look around,
Objects of affection nearing my fingertips,
Like old sentimental prom pictures.
Seeing this life and what I have learned,
Always having the courage and talent,
To reach out with words,
In such a way that makes the soul stretch a little further.
Beyond the pain, the passion, the truth, the lies,
I've alway had this relentless gift,
To create with lightning bolt swiftness,
A safe haven of words for which my life to shine through.
As I stand her thinking I'm nearing some edge,
Finally going to be able to see a little further down,
Perhaps even fall a bit into the brilliant chasm that is me,
I think that I will try to do so with a smile in the end,
No matter where it takes me,
This road,
The new step forward,
And then maybe the ones after that first one,
Won't be so difficult to take.
And this could be a declaration for tomorrow and my future,
Or this could just be a declaration,
To get me through the next few moments of my life.
I know not the outcome after these words,
For I have learned that perhaps we are all too perfectionists for planning our lives,
When our lives really aren't in our hands at all.
But then again,
They say your life is what you make it.
Ahh..
My friends.
I do not know.
For although I have been called wise beyond my years,
I simply see myself struggling to grow more every day,
Just as everyone else tries.
But we, the Poets,
The people of passion made of the depth of life,
Will always remain constant to the words.
And if for just one moment I am moved to smile,
While the wind tickles my face,
I will cherish it as if such a moment will never happen again.
If a person deems it necessary to smile at me,
I will be as enchanted as a child with the shapes in the clouds.
As a poet, a growing all consuming passion,
I promise to open myself wider,
And spread my wings to places within myself and outside of myself,
That even the bravest of spirits are wary to go.
Will you fly with me?


still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-05-24 09:22 PM


I know that I will. . . and I'm sure that there will be others that will join me. . .

This is superb, one of the best that you have done. . . from your heart and from your soul. . .

Congratulations my friend. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Snowdwen
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 75
Louisiana
2 posted 2001-05-24 09:33 PM


Well put together.. you seem tp pull forth how a poet can feel.. how some of us tend to seprate from the rest of this wacked out world.

"You live you learn and life moves on"



Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2001-05-24 10:03 PM


Temptress, my friend...
I wish you a very hearty "Congratulations" on your 3,000, and yes...the sky is open, so spread your wings, and lead the way, my friend, and we'll explore the future together!!  

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


Kay
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since 2001-04-13
Posts 70

4 posted 2001-05-24 10:03 PM


Congratulations and yes I will fly with you!!
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-24 10:45 PM


Way to go!  Congratulations and please keep writing.
Greeneyes
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
6 posted 2001-05-25 12:58 PM


3000 and
indeed


moving
forward with heart, and your style


wonderful
Temptress


here's to 3000
more....




Lauren~


***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


Mysteria
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7 posted 2001-05-26 06:09 AM


Congratulations on our 3000th post, but more importantly the willingness and wanting to spread your wings and fly.  
Don't hold back!  I am one fan that will be flying right behind you gal, and one day, I can say, "I knew her when...."

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
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Charisma
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lost in blue pages
8 posted 2001-05-30 04:26 PM


Congratulation on 3000th post....and there's no doubt about flying with you....count me in.

((hugs))
Charisma

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
9 posted 2001-05-30 04:53 PM


WOOOOHHHH

Standing ovation!!!!!!!

Congrads on the 3000th post        

"you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see"  Whipping boy

Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
10 posted 2001-05-30 10:55 PM


Strength and tenderness, do go together you know. gentle maid, you are endowed with both..gentle smile
Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
11 posted 2001-05-30 11:14 PM


A lovely reflection on your life
and sharing of poetry, Jenn.

Thank you.

Cor

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