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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-05-24 07:38 PM





He once was a tree
Ment to be burned in a stove
change of desteny


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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-05-24 11:09 PM


How sad!
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2 posted 2001-06-10 11:52 PM


never expected this....you surprised me...
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3 posted 2001-06-11 02:15 AM


Hmmm, I'm so curious about the photo that was supposed to occur here.  I feel like it would bring a fulness to the haiku.

[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 06-11-2001).]

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4 posted 2001-06-11 05:02 AM


You know by losing the photo this now becomes many things in my mind, however, all of them are sad and one in particular relating to history, brought me to tears. Excellent haiku.

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~

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5 posted 2001-06-11 07:31 AM


Very nice words!
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6 posted 2001-06-11 07:51 AM


Nice.......
did I say nice?
very nice........


Titia Geertman
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7 posted 2001-06-11 01:24 PM


Thanks to you all for replying, but without the picture the haiku makes little sense.

So I posted a renewed one.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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