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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Windows Glass not mirrors Do they hide what you think they should With just the sheers pulled Or do they show enough to keep me in the neighborhood Along dark streets I stride Looking for windows Where people try to hide Wearing almost nothing Up ahead what do I see But a light shining like sunshine Coming thru the trees The neighbors yard is safe harbor for me As I sit back with glee I watch a young lady Undress for me Little does she know That she is putting on a show Or does she She stand in front of the mirror Seeing all she can see Watching as much as I can stand I slowly sneak away I hear someone yell at me Hey mister, you want to come in with me Icyheart May 2001 |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely! |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
You know when I was getting ready for bed last night I had a feeling someone was enjoying what they seen.(Smile) I loved this.Great poem |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Alan, Well you peeping Tom! Shame shame shame  Good poem, made me chuckle hehe.TaraB |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hum....seems like shades AND shutters are needed... reminds me of a song from the 60's.... wait a moment, the title will come to me.... took a walk and passed your house late last night all the shades were pulled and drawn way down tight... yeah, that song!! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 05-25-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah Alan...that WAS you you sneaky thing...but oooohhhh just the thought of someone peeping in my windows sends shivers...thank goodness for my babies...all five of them....I dont think too many people wanna mess with a 115 lb Rottweiler defending mama LOL |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
you know you should invest in a set of binoculars or at least some camouflage gear. enjoye the read and remember next time to also watch out for the cops. "across the unfair divide |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Window shopping pays off, I guess. Good read. Melton |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Brian....thank you for your input. IT wasn't the cops that caught me. It was the girl. I had fun doing this one. Glad you enjoyed it. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
2dalimit....yes sometimes it does. Thank you for reading and commenting |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Walker,Cheryl,rosepetals,sunshine, Paula. I posted a thank you here yesterday but it seems to have gotten lost. But no biggie. Thank you for taking the time and reading this. I had fun writing it. |
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