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snowpants
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0 posted 2001-05-24 06:13 PM




I just walked into a blur of topaz..
everything I was thinking, I spewed forth,
regardless of who was in the vicinity...

I just spoke into a slur of words...
anything I wanted, I required to involve inspiration,
in spite of the lack of muse in my lately...

I just thought of that golden thing to say...
uncertainty, having created exclusive commotion,
has finally secured its own ends together...

I just realized the possibilities here...
the sapphire sky, made just for our acquaintance,
grows impatient for us to notice...

-kh 05/23/01

everytime I close my eyes,
I see your face,
I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize
that I can feel you on my fingertips...

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walker
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1 posted 2001-05-24 08:11 PM


Very beautiful indeed!
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2 posted 2001-05-24 09:05 PM


there's a sky???  

great one sp. . .

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Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-05-24 10:08 PM


I just realized the possibilities here...
the sapphire sky, made just for our acquaintance,
grows impatient for us to notice...
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this is a cool premise and I like the way you walked us thru this thought process of emotions and inspire..
and always with way cool imagery and use of colors and metaphor...
what can I say that I havent said before
waaay cool BlizzardBritches   LMAO hehe
(obnoxious?? yeppers)  

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-24 10:19 PM


I truly enjoyed this one....
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