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walker
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0 posted 2001-05-24 05:21 PM



You held my hand and I smiled.
I should have stopped you then,
but didn't.
You kissed my lips, I kissed you back,
I tried to end this, but wouldn't.
You touched my soul, I should have avoided that,
but didn't.
We should have made love without regrets,
but couldn't.


[This message has been edited by walker (edited 05-24-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-05-24 05:26 PM


Very tenderly spoken.... enjoyed this much...


Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


latin passion
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2 posted 2001-05-24 05:27 PM


A heart stopper indeed. Loved it.

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

Titia Geertman
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3 posted 2001-05-24 07:50 PM


Walker, dear friend, I just love this.

Titia

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4 posted 2001-05-24 09:08 PM


I see a lot going on here walker. . . a lot of feelings. . . some confusing, some not. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Watersign6
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5 posted 2001-06-05 02:07 PM


excellent write Walker,love it  
Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2001-06-05 02:08 PM


Sometimes you just can't stop it no matter how hard you try.  Very well done.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Deafheaven
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7 posted 2001-06-05 02:12 PM


Regrets have been heavy on my mind as of late

Thanks for sharing yours

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8 posted 2001-06-05 02:33 PM


(sigh) Another beautiful poem from our sweet Walker! (smiles) I know that feeling ever so much too where I wished I could never let my love go in my dreams and hold and kiss her eternally! (smiles) When I find a love of my own, I want to hold her as long as I can and love her with all my heart! (sigh) Your poems never cease to take my breath away, they're all so gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

crazymary
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9 posted 2001-06-05 09:04 PM


i enjoyed your poem. but you should never regret, it's always what you were feeling at the moment.
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10 posted 2001-06-05 10:12 PM


Yes, a heartfelt write, indeed...good work, walker...I like it a lot!

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I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

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