a true story (let me know what u think)

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Open Poetry #14

a true story (let me know what u think)

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-05-24 04:01 PM

most of my poems are about love
or about how much i miss the girl i love
its sad to think of her because i miss her
so im going to make a poem that isnt sad
and not about love....   it cant be done
          so here goes

          outside i see a dove
         who must be in love
         look now i see two
         with their young and new
         so as i said it couldn't be done
         so now i lay by my self in the sun

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

1 posted 2001-05-24 07:54 PM

Nice, I like it!

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