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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
consider mirrors just glass silvered to gleam in chromed reflection pause a bit for introspection in shadow’s light clear glass still reflects the night draws one’s gaze toward the bright in shine of sun seeing self narcisstic, not but eyes look back, still hot mirror my soul or glass me in the truth shall out my spirit held quiet, therein Happiness in intelligent people is the rarest thing I know. E. Hemingway |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
in shine of sun seeing self narcisstic, not but eyes look back, still hot mirror my soul or glass me in the truth shall out my spirit held quiet, therein I wish my brain was not so weary then I could give this poem the attention it deserves. judging by this poem I know you have found beautiful things to reflect, continue to ponder and produce poetry  "across the unfair divide |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Another interesting piece...well written. Poeminister |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I like this. a very enjoyable read. I can't pick any one part cause its all good |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Enjoyed, thanks for sharing! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DecaFlame~ I visualize reflections of you in this multi-faceted penning.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this is fascinating! kind of an adult perspective "Alice Through the Looking Glass." Enjoyed the view/vision. |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
wonderful, loved it. $ Jeff $ : ) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hmmm...I see a "house of mirrors" type thing, where someone is trapped inside, and as I read I could almost see a kaleidoscope type situation (I guess my imagination ran away on me again!) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
good clear images |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I think your spirit will never be kept within. I can think of no vessel large enough to contain such. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
what a excellent read i love it you are truely gifted with a wonderful talent. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I "consider" this an interesting and thought-provoking read. Michael Proust- |
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Rain Junior Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 21Atlanta, GA |
This is stunning. I especially loved the ending. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Awesome poem, alot of thought went into this poem. Enjoyed I did. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Great thought provoking poem. Enjoyed very much. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I just realized I had not come back to thank each and every one of you for your wonderful responses.... some of you see what you want, some of you always seem to peer in a little closer and take away that much more.... a group hug, to all of you fine poets.... thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat! |
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