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Seduction Seeks She (Alliteration)

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Marsha
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Seduction Seeks She (Alliteration)


She smiles seductively
Sensuously she shimmers
Slipping sinuously
She seeks sin

He hunts hungrily
Hearing her heart
He hears hope

She sighs softly

He hears

Sinking slowly she succumbs

He hastens her heart
Heat heaps heat

Spiraling she shoots starward
Shedding streaming sparks

Sharing starlight she shines

He hears her heartbeat

She smiles

Heavenly he
Sighs softly

Simple seductution


Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


© Copyright 2001 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
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WOW!!!! Marsha! I love this!! You're gonna have to tell me how to do this! I just love it!    SEA
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oh now I like this love. . . so very well done. . . and it reads wonderfully. . .

thank you for sharing. . .  

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Perfectly penned
she sighs softly
LOL I give sister ...this is fantastic
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"Spiraling she shoots starward"

Enjoyed this.  Well done!

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Look at Puck, stretching wings....

Brava!
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and she enjoyed every minute of it????  

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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MarshaLove~
This is marvelously penned !
I adore the muse of your keep ~

Love you, sweet poetess !
~*Marge*~

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A bit of fluff, but worth a smile
              
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Wonderful Marsha! Beautiful sentiments wrapped up in twirling alliteration, I really enjoyed this, well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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prefectly penned poetry.  

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I "see" you!!!!! Wow....so pretty!! Ya! I finally see Mushy!!!!
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Such sweet simplicity
Wonderfull written words

Titia
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sigh
 
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