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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-24 10:16 AM

Celebration in Surrender

I surrender,
I surrender
to a force
oh so tender
to you
I give all
spellbound
in your call
the candle awaits
with fire
waxen melt
in desire
yearning
for your request
totally yours
no protest
a celebration
to evoke
awakened
with every stroke
every trace
of your sensation
is the gift
of your temptation

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

1 posted 2001-05-24 10:17 AM

mmmmmmmmm this makes me wish for just such a temptation, you worded this perfectly

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2001-05-24 11:36 AM

This is good....very good....

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2001-05-24 12:26 PM

Slick--Enjoyed the read. Well said.

PM

love's victim
New Member

since 2001-05-24

Posts 2
the old city icehouse

4 posted 2001-05-24 05:00 PM

you sizzle!

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

5 posted 2001-05-24 09:24 PM

Temptation can be a celebration.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-05-24 10:06 PM

lovely thoughts, Helen.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

7 posted 2001-05-25 12:37 PM

serender
begs
  serender

to
sensations'
  celebrations

spellbound
we're
  found

burning
with
  yearning

S Arthur

. . . Hills jump with brooks.
trees tumble out of twigs and sticks;
e e cummings

[This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (edited 05-25-2001).]

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

8 posted 2001-05-25 02:25 AM

What a tempting offer - LP

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

9 posted 2001-05-25 11:46 AM

The candle awaits...excellent!

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

10 posted 2001-06-03 03:53 PM

Wonderful poem, I really love the title....
Celebration in Surrender

enjoyed the read

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

11 posted 2001-06-04 02:16 PM

This is so wonderful! I sure wish I had your talent! Great work!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

12 posted 2001-06-05 02:26 AM

Surrender? or subtle retreat, which wins wars also. Very lovely read..thank you...gentle smile

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

13 posted 2001-06-05 02:31 AM

Oh goodness, whew...

Now this is what I call a sensual poem. I loved it, dear lady, and thank you.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

kansas-jim
Junior Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 22
Willits,Ca

14 posted 2001-06-05 09:04 PM

My goodness, I can't wait to work with you. You touched me. Thank you

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