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Dream On
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Dream On Dream on, young one, the day is new The earth of May is sweet with dew Fresh scent of early breezes creep Through morning’s window as you sleep The dawn is peeking through the mist Soon sun will find a cheek to kiss And wake your lovely slumbering eyes To bright of day and blue of skies But now in shades of purple hue Let shadows wrap and comfort you In secret dreams of fantasy Of one whose love you’ve yet to see Just one more moment filled with bliss With eyelids closed to early mist Sweet dreams behind the sleeping eyes Will soon be gone with sunny skies The dreams beneath a midnight moon Are meant to be forgotten soon The dreams you dream with open eye Will last until the day you die Elizabeth Santos |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What a lovely lullabye....as only you can sing them.... this is wonderful, Lady Santos, and a keeper.... |
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Morgoth Junior Member
since 2001-05-21
Posts 26Baltimore, MD |
And then after death, the dream becomes reality As we sleep our way through eternity... Beautiful "I know someday you'll have a beautiful life |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Your usual excellent, enjoyed this read very much. By the way I just became a great grand dad. Sy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
enjoyed fully! Kathleen Blake |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Liz, Thank you for this lovely and peaceful dream. Michael Proust- |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
"Dream on, young one, the day is new The earth of May is sweet with dew Fresh scent of early breezes creep Through morning’s window as you sleep" I love this. Your poem is so clear and easy to visualize the concepts it contains. Until you are are near it, you will never see it, until you live it you will never know it...this is why we must not judge it. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A surpassingly beautiful piece. Excellent writing. Poeminister |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for reading and for your kind remarks, and congratulations Sy on that new great grandchild. How wonderful! Liz |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You got me with this one...I can't sing or I would sing it to my Granddaughter, and I hope it gets to be a lullabye that is sung by many as it is too nice not to be shared in a "big way"! Beautiful work as usual. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Liz--I am counting the days til I am a grandmother...but I doubt I will sing a song that feels so sweet. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
  great poem! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sweet and dreamy, Elizabeth! Beautiful! Congratulations, Sy! That's great! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Well my dear, I just read your poem in time, for in just a moment I will dream on with your lovely words in my head and heart. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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