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Victoria
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0 posted 2001-05-25 11:02 AM


I had a taste of love for a moment
a heart beating against mine
i had a taste of passion
in the spring, a year ago
someone i use to know
left me with lovely memories
kisses from my head to toe

I had a taste of passion
i loved him for three years
for him i was a passing fancy
each kiss..another game
a sport he played often
but just not he i will blame

i was caught in a deceitful web
and she was a black widow
luring in the shadows
i had a taste of passion
he was not just one of few
i had a taste of passion
i swam in his eyes of blue

we walked in the misty rain
holding hands like lovers
our long awaited rendezvous
lasted not long enough

his bear hugs i remember
left me breathless in his arms
soft kisses in elevators
dinners within candlelight charms

holding hands across the table
making love in the jasmine night
i had a taste of passion
i know he was wrong for me
a wine woman and song man
i loved faithfully.




Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 05-25-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
angelswing
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1 posted 2001-05-25 11:08 AM


Wow, cool poem, I have a poem much like this one, that reminds me to put it up . I realy enjoyed reading that poem, it had a lot of meaning and a brilliant flow . Thankyou very much .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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PoeticKnight
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2 posted 2001-05-25 11:34 AM


A really good poem, I liked it.


"we walked in the misty rain
holding hands like lovers
our long awaited rendezvous
lasted not long enough"

This was great, it never is enough, isn't it?

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-05-25 11:47 AM


Oh boy, what lines, what passion, what desire....oh boy

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


brian madden
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4 posted 2001-05-25 02:54 PM


Victoria, I am remained of the saying "it is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all."wonderfully written poem, really enjoyed the read.

"across the unfair divide
where black will never meet white
so read my token lips
as though they never exist"

nicky wire


Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-05-25 03:09 PM


this is a bittersweet and sadly beautiful write,
Welcome back Victoria, nice to see your name and lovely poetry here again  

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

Victoria
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6 posted 2001-05-25 04:03 PM


thank you angelswing...nice of you to stop by

poeticknight..no not when you are in love..glad you enjoyed..thank you for peeking in

irish rose..yes and if i knew you were in indianapolis
at the time i could of called you haa..maybe haa..hugs

thank you brian..yes but sometimes i wonder about that..
i wasnt sure if the good outweighed the bad..thanks for reading

Hi janet Marie..so nice to hear from you..and am looking forward to reading your words again...hugss..

                 ~Victoria~


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso


insect
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7 posted 2001-05-25 08:46 PM


A Taste of Passion
Well I’m in…for a taste!
Hi Victoria nice to taste you again!

Victoria
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8 posted 2001-05-25 10:08 PM


so nice to hear from you insect..
missed you..nice to be back

                ~Victoria~


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso


Sven
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9 posted 2001-05-25 10:22 PM


the memories are wonderful here. . . very blissful. . .

excellent. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Victoria
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10 posted 2001-05-26 08:53 AM


Thank you sven..yes bittersweet memories..glad you enjoyed

                     ~Victoria~


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso


LAA
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11 posted 2001-05-27 09:27 AM



Your words certainly fulfill the title, I hope to read more of you.

LAA

Charisma
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12 posted 2001-05-27 09:32 AM


heartfelt touch of passions.
excellent.

((hugs))
Charisma

Victoria
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13 posted 2001-05-27 10:31 AM


Thank you LAA ..glad you enjoyed and welcome to passions..

Charisma..nice to hear from you. Ive been offline for awhile..nice to be back HUGSS..

                      ~Victoria~


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso


catalinamoon
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14 posted 2001-05-28 08:56 PM


Vic, me too! Not fair, is it?
Sandra

Victoria
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15 posted 2001-05-29 09:05 AM


its there loss haa...HUGSS..thanks for visiting hon  

                 ~Victoria~


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso


Jaime Fradera
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16 posted 2001-05-31 01:03 PM


This is Universal Fantasy,
and you, in fact ARE passion;
and you are being sought.
Jaime


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