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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-24 02:01 AM



My Sister    (ok dd this one is for you)


my sister
means the world
to me
she is the goddess
of light
she has the gift
to heal
she has the gift
of sight
she teaches me
of things
I don’t
understand
and no matter
where I am
her hand
is always
in my hand
her blood
is my blood
but not the tie
that binds
it’s more the way
I know her
and she knows me
that we are
entwined
and if
for my life
I had to choose
only one friend
it would be
you forever
and would I change
my mind……
never

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Waseem Cheema
Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369
Pakistan
1 posted 2001-05-24 02:55 AM


Yes Sisters are so much lovely things...capable of Love up to its full extent  
Qumar Fatthi
Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59
Pakistan
2 posted 2001-05-24 04:37 AM


u r right sisters are the most lovely gift from God plz care for..............
good work  



Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
3 posted 2001-05-24 04:43 AM


I have many sisters...and I love them all dearly.
Wish I could do for everyone one what you have done here.

Beautiful work.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-05-24 02:14 PM


I wish my sisters felt this way about me, this is wonderful

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Saunni
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
5 posted 2001-05-24 03:02 PM


This is sooooo beautiful! I so can relate to this one. I have an older sister, and younger sister, and a twin sister and the three of us are the best of friends. I enjoyed this tremendously.  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

ArielsLite
New Member
since 2001-05-24
Posts 1

6 posted 2001-05-24 09:47 PM


Helen, my sweet sister. What an honor and a blessing you are to me. Thank you for the lovely poem and for your friendship. It brought tears to my eyes and joy to my soul.

My hand in yours always Sis! I love you.

DD


1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
7 posted 2001-05-24 10:00 PM


thank you all very much

DD..i am so happy you liked...2 bodies 1 heart...you and i...love you

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


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