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Temptress
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0 posted 2001-05-23 08:57 PM


Passionately tender,
Hope ensnared,
A heartfelt love beyond compare.
Whisper sweet, my words awhile,
Say not your curtains, the view defiles.
For sword cast anger as a wanton spirit,
Listelessly advised, I refused to hear it.
Captured true insomnia's glare,
From hand, this pen, wrenched a tear.
Needing to go, but willing to stay,
Which way will I take, how will I sway?

Decisions pondered are ill excuses to run, and sometimes we are only running from ourselves.



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Sven
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1 posted 2001-05-23 09:01 PM


only the heart can know the direction. . .

excellent writing. . . I can see that you're looking. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress
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2 posted 2001-05-23 09:19 PM


Thanks..
Looking?
Not for what this poem may imply. LOL!


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3 posted 2001-05-24 01:52 AM


Temptress~

'Captured true insomnia's glare,
From hand, this pen, wrenched a tear'


Oh, yes ... been there often.
Nice penning, gal.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Waseem Cheema
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4 posted 2001-05-24 02:46 AM


Yes Sven is very much right... I am agree with him

[This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 05-24-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-05-24 08:33 PM


Even bamboo breaks!  Listen to your inner voice as it was put there for a good reason, and one would be to protect a heart from breaking, or doing things we do not wish to do in order ot appease others.  amen - he he

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