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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
among diamond light revelations lies the green integrity in his eyes... cruising along the mountain path-- further expressing how I found his face-- the marigolds demonstrate their expertise... with no particular existence pattern, shimmering light shafts reach the valley, where the creek receives them as its own, affectionately fostering every beam... carved deep in sapphire thoughts, honeysuckles dancing down this dirt road keep my mind rehearsing this melody, not to be sidetracked by obligation‘s debt... looking directly past my eyes’ facade to the depths of my actuality, the golden excellence of his intuition saved me from the concealed patch of instability on the brink of the abyss... -kh 05/23/01 And all I ever wanted from this play was someone to talk to when I get down... It seems you get the things you give along the way; Now all I need is one more chance to make you feel like hanging round [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful is the word! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what an expressive journey this was! Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love the way that you make the words flow so well sp. . . they tell the story so well. . . and with such depth. . . well done. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
looking directly past my eyes’ facade to the depths of my actuality, the golden excellence of his intuition saved me from the concealed patch of instability on the brink of the abyss... ============================= Ive said it before... I admire the way your poetic mind works... and I wish I had this kind of inspire... cuz when I look past my facade to my depths of actuality ... it puts me right over the instability abyss... but hey...Im a moth...we live for the brink awesome poem SP...as always We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ This is such a lovely emoting ~ 'among diamond light revelations lies the green integrity in his eyes... cruising along the mountain path-- further expressing how I found his face-- the marigolds demonstrate their expertise...' Beautiful images spring from this write. You keep a muse fulfilled with beauty such as this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Was this a virtual painting or reality? What a gem. let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush... |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
walker: thank you, my friend...I am glad you could stop by! Kathleen: thanks so much! glad you liked! Sven: well, thank you very much...I am happy you enjoyed this!  JM: you flatter me as always, m'friend...I'm glad you liked this one...thanks so much for your support of my writing! it means a whole heck of a lot, ya know...   Marge: thank you so much, my friend...I am happy that you liked this! I appreciate your kind reply! lp: well, let's just say it's a little of both...  ...but I am glad you liked it! thanks so much!sp  |
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LAA Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 11 |
Each word, a thread woven delightfully! LAA |
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