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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2001-05-23 08:05 PM



Your Poem

you ask me
to write a poem
a poem
just for you
I tried
and I tried
but
nothing
would do
for the
sweetest poem
I know
is the poem
between
me and you

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-05-23 08:07 PM


*sigh*

you know that I love this one helen. . .

it's perfect. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
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2 posted 2001-05-23 08:19 PM


And both of you deserve such a poem...cherish it!
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-05-23 08:27 PM


very nice, Helen, very nice

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Bill Charles
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4 posted 2001-05-23 09:07 PM


1slick_lady - yes, you certainly are; 1slick_lady....... Just beautiful.....

Bc


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5 posted 2001-05-24 09:17 PM


Such a sweet secret 1slick_lady.
vandana
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6 posted 2001-05-25 10:31 AM


nice liked it
PoeticKnight
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7 posted 2001-05-25 11:42 AM


Just saw this one, I love this. The poem between me and you...very poetic.
bslicker
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8 posted 2001-05-30 02:10 PM


Thank You..... I really like this
You know i've asked and asked and asked,
And finally this Great One.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2001-05-30 02:29 PM


This is really, really, really...........yes, so ever good!!!

Thank you so much

Titia

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Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

ethome
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10 posted 2001-05-30 03:30 PM


Delightful sweet writing. I really like the conclusion!
Charisma
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11 posted 2001-05-30 03:35 PM


perfect in every way....love it

Charisma

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