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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2001-05-23 04:54 PM



Beware the green dragon, a cold-hearted beast...
Creeping  into your innocent lives...
To take down his victims, upon them to feast...
In guises of husbands and wives...

His eyes look upon everything that you’ve  done...
And green with pure envy they turn...
The innocent other can feel it begin,
but tries to deny what is learned...

The dragon has loomed high above all the while...
But one partner chose not to see...
And blindly denied what was known in her heart...
With envy, a love cannot be...

There’s always a question, there’s always the pain...
There’s never a change to be tried...
With false accusations, and burning  remarks,
the love once inside, simply died...

To look in the eyes of a mate and see nothing,
but jealousy, which you despise...
Can only ensure that  you just cannot stay,
in the gaze of those green-dragon eyes...

The longing to look into eyes full of love,
is a longing the heart has to bear...
And someday those eyes with their gentle  clear gaze...
Will replace the cold green dragon stare...

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression
1 posted 2001-05-23 05:14 PM


Very nice,
Enjoyable reading

Gloom

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2001-05-23 06:03 PM


Thankyou, Gloom...
(Sunny)

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-05-23 06:53 PM


I've always hated jealously which is why I say tell the truth and you hopefully, don't have to worry about it.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2001-05-23 09:43 PM


the green-eyed monster rears it's head
again....


sorry to see that my friend


peace
and hugs to you...


 





Lauren~

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


Alan
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since 2000-09-12
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right next door
5 posted 2001-05-23 09:54 PM


The green dragon can get to any of us. I enjoyed the read.
Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
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Hurricane,WV
6 posted 2001-06-06 08:44 AM


very enjoyable read  
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