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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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0 posted 2001-05-23 04:36 PM


looming nigh the
moment

will the spark,
spark

will the candle
kindle

shall the moon
wax and wane

will either ever
‘gain be sane

or be same
as before

this, the pall of noir

in breathless
realize

a chemist’s dream
shall materialize

in the meeting
of the eyes

in the touch
the spark shall shower

all ‘neath this
most heavenly bower

looming nigh the
moment

breath in breast
comes up in rise

looming nigh

chest tightens
in surprise

looming

hear the sighs…


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Professor Gloom
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of Depression
1 posted 2001-05-23 04:48 PM


Interesting.

Gloom

JLR
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2 posted 2001-05-23 04:53 PM


Very different...like this style!
PoeticKnight
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New Orleans, LA
3 posted 2001-05-23 04:54 PM


Heavenly.
Temptress
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Mobile, AL
4 posted 2001-05-23 05:22 PM


I do believe that you have me hooked!   Very well done, this!  


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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-05-25 12:37 PM


First date?
Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Auguste
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By the sea
6 posted 2001-05-25 03:37 PM


This is pretty...just wish it had been longer.  Thanks  

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Watersign6
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7 posted 2001-06-06 07:55 AM


and  
Cpat Hair
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8 posted 2001-06-06 08:22 AM


Like the form and the tension held in the words...nicely written and certainly one I could relate to
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