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Open Poetry #14

Morgoth
Junior Member

since 2001-05-21

Posts 26
Baltimore, MD

0 posted 2001-05-23 03:02 PM

So, about man is
Haiku, and thoughts of nature
makes a Senryu

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-23 03:13 PM

Listen dear student
backwards you are not, but switch
nature, haiku is

senryu is you
and me and thee and him, thus
confusion, don't cuss

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-05-23 03:52 PM

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try this link MG
we have a poetry workshop here in passions and a really cool teacher

you can do a search in the worshop to find other lessons on these and many other styles and formats of poetry.

Morgoth
Junior Member

since 2001-05-21

Posts 26
Baltimore, MD

3 posted 2001-05-23 04:39 PM

Thank you JanetMarie. I switched my words wrongly.

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