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Windy Candle

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Professor Gloom
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since 07-23-2000
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of Depression


0 posted 05-23-2001 02:10 PM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

Candle flame flickers,
Wind slips under the window,
Then smoke and darkness.

Cold fingers searches,
Placing flame back to the wick,
Returns the flicker.

Gloom

© Copyright 2001 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
angelbear
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1 posted 05-23-2001 03:11 PM       View Profile for angelbear   Email angelbear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelbear

So little can say so much. Again, this is what I find most creative and meaningful. Wonderful work.  

Until you are are near it, you will never see it, until you live it you will never know it...this is why we must not judge it.

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace


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yes professor...let your light shine...helen
Decaflame
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gloom, thy night is gone
return to thy candle's light
escape burning bright
Professor Gloom
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4 posted 05-23-2001 04:44 PM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

Thank you, angelbear,
Your words are kind,
And I do prefer the shorter forms.

Thank you, Helen,
I am pleased you liked it.

Thank you, Decaflame
Decaflame response,
builds pleasure from revealing,
the inner shining.


Gloom
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When candles flicker and die,
May the flame always be near.

Beautiful work..
corey14
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it is a good pome
passing shadows
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good write Gloom
 
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