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timely speaking |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
timely speaking in speaking [or not speaking at all] of the time of time not so distant my timely thoughts come ‘round to you again in the silence, the ticking of the clicking of the wind of the clock’s gears rears and cheers and spears me a little louder there, and here…. in the silence here, and there in the silence, you are still heard there, and here, in the quiet, your force is felt in the melt of the day from the heat of the night in the cool of the shadows after the meet of twilight there and here in not speaking at all [in speaking] that time that was our time not so distant as yesterday not so close as tomorrow but our time timeless windless chimeless in the silence my thoughts ‘round and rondo you our song never leaving my soul even ‘tho halved still whole of the time of time that still which is mine is mirrored in your time write with grace, all others lose face; |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
of the time of time that still which is mine is mirrored in your time .... Excellent work, Lady in White... regards, sudhir |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Bitter Sweet! Amazing how people touch our lives. You've penned your feelings very well. Much enjoyed your work Lady!  ~Sheri |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, L..i..W... I loved this one.....it floated through my mind and embraced a favorite subject of mine: time.......wonderful!!!  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
There are times that silence is not golden! This was bittersweet, but so well done. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"rears and cheers and spears me a little louder" Yes, I understand this feeling well. I like the way this is written. Very cleverly constructed. Michael Proust- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
but our time timeless windless chimeless in the silence my thoughts ‘round and rondo you our song never leaving my soul even ‘tho halved still whole of the time of time that still which is mine is mirrored in your time =========================== loved the presentation of this lady... it reads the same way you define the passages of time I love the whole feel of this one... the wind, the silence, the need.. well done poetess white We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
nice metaphor here. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the mirror of time two hearts of love different yet the same time stops. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
my thoughts ‘round and rondo you our song never leaving my soul even ‘tho halved still whole of the time of time that still which is mine is mirrored in your time ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A concerto of words, an aria of thought, a crescendo of skill. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Oh, beautifully done. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
well done  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah..bitter sweet remembrances..or musings...well captured in word and tone |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Your thoughtful, enthusiastic, and well rendered comments leave me fulfilled, as I can see, that you read this with your heart, as well as your mind.... thank you all.... |
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