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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-05-23 08:45 AM

A crystaline tear trickles down,
mixing with the saltiness
of the beautiful blue Pacific
lapping gently at my feet.
Staring at the horizon
I watch for distant sails
making their way to hidden oasis.......

Where are you?

Am I ever going to discover
your sweet lips,
the way you smile at me,
the longing in your eyes,
talking with you about everything
and nothing at all for hours,
making love until dawn glows brightly in our eyes

I thought I saw you....

The man who perfectly matches me,
who loves me solely for who I am,
who can appreciate how very much
I want to please him and be beside him.
But I just haven't found you yet.

Where are you my love?

Tears slide silently from emerald eyes
obliterating the beauty of the day.
My grievous wounds are
just too great
to watch other lovers
enraptured in the joys of paradise.....

Paradise is a lonely place...
And time is running out as I wait and watch the horizon for that one distant sail......

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-05-23 09:55 AM

The beauty of this comes through the sadness, and I feel the course of that crystalline tear....

thank you for sharing this....

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2001-05-23 10:45 AM

When it seems the whole world walks two by two, aloneness is magnified. You've written a poem of beauty and sadness... well done!

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

3 posted 2001-05-23 11:17 AM

Koko, May you find your bird of Paradise,
and may he be brilliant!
And may your paradise be beautiful again!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2001-05-23 03:32 PM

I like this.....brilliant writing!!

Nathan

DYME
Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

5 posted 2001-05-23 03:35 PM

I FELT THAT ONE.

NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-05-23 04:32 PM

Koko this is silky soft...James

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-05-23 06:51 PM

the perfect setting...paradise

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-05-23 07:53 PM

excellent, a superb setting. . . definitely not one for such sadness. . . you show the feelings very well here. . .

I like it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

9 posted 2001-05-24 03:00 AM

Excellent writing Koko. How about we girls go on a tropical shopping spree?

"I am not now that which I have been."

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