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Her Love Is Like A Raging River

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Mysteria
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~*~
Her Love Is Like A Raging River
~*~


Her love is like a raging river,
Flowing through an open heart,
Her path will not be changed,
She will never stop nor start.
Never slowing, ever flowing,
Always showing, caring, knowing.

~*~ <3 ~*~

As though her heart was made to sing,
She rises like a hidden waterfall,
She pushes onward to her resting place,
As she can hear her loverís call.
Her currents strong, her path is long,
And yet she sings a silent song.

~*~ <3 ~*~

Harsh winds disturb her placid silence,
And attempt to shake her plains,
But she stands steadfast, never wavering,
Flowing through hidden tears of rain.
Her heart grows stronger; it wonít be long,
So sweetly she sings her hopeful song.

~*~ <3 ~*~

The currents of her heart will not change,
Nor her flow sway in the passing,
Tests of time, obstacles and hardships,
Will only make her glory everlasting.
She will hold strong, and always be near,
Breathe,and only love you'll hear.


~*~ With Love to my D ~*~

Music: "Breathe"
Art: Jim Warren "Island Dream"

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 05-23-2001 07:44 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Most beautiful...

Muchly enjoyed...

regards,
sudhir
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2 posted 05-23-2001 08:11 AM       View Profile for Martha Cowan   Email Martha Cowan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Martha Cowan

((((((((HUGS)))))))))
How you have started my morning off with a huge smile from ear to ear.  Thank you, Sharon...you do so many wonderful things for me, and the gift of your friendship is priceless to me.  This was so very beautiful, and describes the emotions raging through my heart so vividly!  Thank you!!!
I love ya muches, always, dawn

AJ MacNeil
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3 posted 05-23-2001 10:15 AM       View Profile for AJ MacNeil   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for AJ MacNeil

Just beautiful Sharon ... and this is indeed the most beautiful river I have ever known ... and the pure waters wash over me, cleansing me and making me complete and contented ... thankyou so much for this ! ... with love AJ ...
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4 posted 05-23-2001 12:00 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

This is so touching, Sharon. I think that's the best thing about true love, that it flows on and on just like a river. Great work here.
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5 posted 05-23-2001 03:25 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Thank you for enjoying this one, it was for a special friend who finally has found "love"!
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6 posted 05-23-2001 09:49 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Breathe,and only love you'll hear"

Stunning, and the music as well...


Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

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Your visual poem is a wonderous sight. Spoke to my heart indeed.

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

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8 posted 05-24-2001 02:51 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Greeneyes: How true, or at least that is how I remember it anyway LOL...thanks for reading.

Latin Passion: Thank you once again for supporting that which I do.
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You are always Excellent ....I love you
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Yep..I echo..STUNNING!
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11 posted 05-24-2001 05:18 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Waseem: Thank you, you flatter me too much, but don't stop, he he.

Temptress: Thank you very much (pssst...I love your work!)
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The currents of her heart will not change,
Nor her flow sway in the passing,
Tests of time, obstacles and hardships,
Will only make her glory everlasting.
She will hold strong, and always be near,
Breathe,and only love you'll hear.

beautifully written poem.

"across the unfair divide
where black will never meet white
so read my token lips
as though they never exist"

nicky wire

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13 posted 05-24-2001 06:39 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I like this...James
Elizabeth Santos
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Beautiful and captivating verse of the power of love
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Mysteria-

Exquisite picture and poem.  Very nicely done.

Poeminister
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Just lovely!
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17 posted 05-24-2001 08:18 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Brian: I do thank you for liking this piece.

James Michael: So glad you enjoyed it.

Elizabeth: Thank you so much for commenting, you approval means a lot to me, as you are the shining example of pure poetry at its very finest.

Poeminister: Now that is a catchy name, you are very clever - you are a smart Canadian eh?  he he Thank you for commenting.

Walker: Thank you but I still think it is the picture we should be giving the credit to here.
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Sharon what a gorgeous, strong poem!  Excellent picture and music to capture the feeling within your words!  

Take care,
Melissa~
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19 posted 05-26-2001 08:49 PM       View Profile for Watersign6   Email Watersign6   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watersign6's Home Page   View IP for Watersign6

loved this poem Mysteria,you are such a marvelous poet  
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20 posted 05-26-2001 10:35 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Melissa: I am so glad this was so well received, thank you.

Watersign6: Boy you sure have been busy reading - I can't wait to read more of yours when you get done viewing, thanks again!
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gorgeous!
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