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Awake, alas....sweet dream
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Awake, alas....sweet dream |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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When the feeling comes again-- this is going to hurt like hell. I feel a ghost pain where it was, an empty ache where it once dwelled. A memory of a voice in calling-- fevered sheets in dream of you... always, am I, ever falling, in my dreams--dream sweet of you. Did you know I long to touch? Trace my fingers on your face? Lace of touch across your back-- whispered kiss of cares away? As I write-I feel this way. Even now I lick my lips. My tongue is lapping on my teeth-- tease of silken succulence. Beneath my arms I feel the shake taut and smooth in rumbled quake-- everything I'd thought before was lost in rock and quest of more. As the sun paints pink the sky streetlights fading with the dawn I hear an echo of your laugh and strain to mark the notes of song. I do not want it to be gone! I wish this time would never end. I wish I could forever dream eternal arms with you to spend. Now the sky in yellow, breaks, and all my promises forsake, I bury head in pillow's lake-- to dream to be with you again. When the feeling comes again, this is going to hurt like hell. I feel a ghost pain where you were an empty ache where you once dwelled... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Did you know I long to touch? Trace my fingers on your face? Lace of touch across your back-- whispered kiss of cares away? Now the sky in yellow, breaks, and all my promises forsake, I bury head in pillow's lake-- to dream to be with you again. When the feeling comes again, this is going to hurt like hell. I feel a ghost pain where you were an empty ache where you once dwelled... Oh K I know this feeling. Beautifully said hon! Maree |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
WOW! That about cover it! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Serene One, This is an absolutely amazing write.... Regards, Sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I do not want it to be gone! I wish this time would never end. I wish I could forever dream eternal arms with you to spend. Now the sky in yellow, breaks, and all my promises forsake, I bury head in pillow's lake-- to dream to be with you again. When the feeling comes again, this is going to hurt like hell. I feel a ghost pain where you were an empty ache where you once dwelled... ==================================== mirrors baby...mirrors of blinding clarity, reflection's of heart. I bury head in pillow's lake do you know how poetically cool that line is WAAYY COOL baby....WAAAAY  someones muse is on fire tonite and I am inhaling every word *S* love ya me twin me We wish ourselves beautiful, we cry in the night. Its not the love you fear ... its the fall from the height. ~Edwin McCain~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If only I could stay in the dreams... for the nightmare is the waking. *S* This hurts, this aches... this is superb! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"tease of silken succulence." This is so fine...James |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 Excellent!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, but there's always next time  Kathleen Blake |
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LAA Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 11 |
Such a lingering presence, passionately scripted! LAA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ 'Now the sky in yellow, breaks, and all my promises forsake, I bury head in pillow's lake-- to dream to be with you again.' Enjoyed it all ... but this just whispers~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, this leaves me gasping for air! It sure does hurt like hell. And the dreams, ah they are so sweet. This is so incredibly good. Sandra |
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