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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-05-23 06:50 AM


Yum

I want to make love to you
for one or two hours.
Relax awhile in arms that charm
then we can hit the showers.
Light some fresh candles.
Some sushi will be so fine.
Slip on some romantic CD's.
Sip some Merlot wine.
Talk stories as
we laugh and touch
while admiring the woman
I want so much.
Isn't this the way
our feelings first began?
Wouldn't mind doing it all again.
Yum...

Jameslee@May23,2001


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1 posted 2001-05-23 07:42 AM


Don't forget strawberries dipped in chocolate!  Yum! This was good!

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Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2001-05-23 07:43 AM


hmmmm

regards,
sudhir

Paula Finn
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3 posted 2001-05-23 01:21 PM


Oh yes wonderfully YUM
Nate Dogg
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4 posted 2001-05-23 03:30 PM


I like this Jimmy....it's sweet, funny and joyous....a good write....peace!

Nathan

JLR
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5 posted 2001-05-23 04:33 PM


Sounds like it would be well worth a rerun...so sweet!
Decaflame
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6 posted 2001-05-23 04:38 PM


good, good, .... very good....
serenity blaze
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7 posted 2001-05-23 04:38 PM


Gotta admit...you to to me with the merlot (how'd you guess?) YUM...is most appropriate...except maybe Yummmmmmmmmmm....lol Thanks, I enjoyed.
Titia Geertman
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8 posted 2001-05-23 05:37 PM


Oh , who wouln't....

Titia

corey14
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9 posted 2001-05-23 06:44 PM


sounds like fun good work keep writeing
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10 posted 2001-05-23 09:47 PM


~*~ sigh ~*~

so romantic....lovely JamesMichael....


Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


JamesMichael
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11 posted 2004-08-12 12:16 PM


I thank each one of you so much...yum...James
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