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It Fades With Time

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


0 posted 05-23-2001 06:42 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nakdthoughts


It Fades With Time

The painfulness of waiting
the want, denied so long

When lips of his engulfed my own
feelings heightened, strong.

Entangled him in sheerness
met his warmth with mine,

Burning softly into night,
lasting for all of time.

Illusions of this dreamworld
the darkness, swallowing me

Losing sense of all surround
I fade into the WE.

Dazed within this time warp
a forever, grained in sand

Turning over, grazed by touch
controlled by time in hand.

I fear the fading moments
when hours turn the tide

Behind remains the passings
To days of now, denied.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium


1 posted 05-23-2001 06:49 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

It sure does...

Well written...

regards,
sudhir
Professor Gloom
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of Depression


2 posted 05-23-2001 09:55 AM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

Inspirational, so..
I wrote this responding poem,
just slightly off the subject.


Capture time,
in a photograph of two,
it does show,
time ago,
a moment I spent with you
beaming bright
in sunlight
which now has become its foe
since twas made
does now fade
into a grayness it goes,
fades in time,
now recaptured in a rhyme.

Gloom
Rain
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since 05-23-2001
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3 posted 05-23-2001 10:26 AM       View Profile for Rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rain

Strong and very well written.   I really liked this.
Irish Rose
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since 04-06-2000
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4 posted 05-23-2001 11:33 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

This is good, Maureen, I mean really good, I like this one very, very much.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

SpitFire
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5 posted 05-23-2001 11:37 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Wynter,...so many wonderful lines here. And the words 'fading' and 'denied' are such solemn, heavy impacts on the poem. Well done with this expression. *Peace.
Victoria
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6 posted 05-24-2001 01:37 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

Enjoyed your words as always Wynter HUGS..
BACK online haa...but no icq just yet...im still on yahoo though..

               ~Victoria~


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

Poeminister
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7 posted 05-24-2001 01:57 PM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

Naked-
Excellent writing...enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


8 posted 05-24-2001 02:16 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I believe that about covers it Wynter...James
vandana
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9 posted 05-24-2001 05:20 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

enjoy
latin passion
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awesome read - look forward to more of your pen.
passing shadows
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11 posted 05-21-2004 01:30 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

very touching write M
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