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The scent of happen...
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The scent of happen... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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In the secretive eye of my cavorting mind, you are everblooming like a yellow jasmine. Strikingly exotic, tenderly sensitive, ardently passionate and naturally wild. Untouchable, you are sheltered and protected, a fragrant flower of many a dark desire. Timidly evoking my innermost feelings, being lost, being lost in the dreamlike wonder of an eastern forest, you seem to be right there amidst the whispering glades of soft green bamboo. Charmingly embracing the moist warm air of night, you are a lover from a distant outside world, of whimsies ethereal, yet so intensely real. Back here, you are sweetness sugar from distant lands - a brilliant flower of graceful polished passion. In the scent of happen! *~!~* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful, Sudhir..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ How very, very lovely are these thoughts. Really enjoying this write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I liked this very much, Sudhir... beautiful! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Great titles....bring spectacular poems.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ok, Sudhir, this is really, really good, more more!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Wonderful...enjoyed! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh this is lovely...this line just aches...you seem to be right there...I love it |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sudhir.... there is no one that can write as you do, with the exotic flair of artistry.....you always paint pictures in my mind of far away and beautiful places, of lands that have ever called my wandering soul.....thank you for yet another trip to Shangri-la......  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
superb Sir. . . well done. . . an excellent metaphor that you tell brilliantly. . . thanks. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wynter, thanks for coming by and I am glad that you find this beautiful Marge, my friend, you are so ever appreciative, and I am very happy that you enjoyed this one Suthern, thank you very much Karilea, and great people come by to pay a much appreciated visit... Thank you Kathleen, I sure do hope that there will be more, for writing is what I do as a hobby, and if wonderful writers like you like this, I will definitely try to do my best. thank you JLR, thanks so very much Paula, thank you muchly for pointing the line that caught your eye the most and I am very happy that you loved this one O Sunnyone, that is a huge compliment, and I am unsure if I deserve this one… but I am glad to be of service to take you to trips of faraway lands through my writing... thank you very much O Sir Sven, thank you so very much, my friend. My regards to all and apologies for not responding earlier, Sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is lovely Sudi especially loved these lines....... Untouchable, you are sheltered and protected, a fragrant flower of many a dark desire. wonderful, wonderful! Maree |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read Sudhir...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sudir what a beauty this poem is! I love the title!! and... "Charmingly embracing the moist warm air of night, you are a lover from a distant outside world, of whimsies ethereal, yet so intensely real. Keep up the good work my poet friend! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Maree, I am extremely happy to see your name here and your supportive reply... thanks a lot... James, a pleasure to see you here, my friend... thank you ethome, my friend, I am glad that you liked what you read and thanks a lot for the visit... regards to all, sudhir |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir...This is so full and inviting to the senses..beautifully written! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
This is breath taking......... so perfumed with the scent of Jasmine and beautiful images......... Your brush is beautiful......... and u reminded me of someone who used to speak of jasmine....... Thank u for sharing this ************************* It's only me.......only me |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Martie, thank you so much that you came by, the invitation is always open for you, my friend MyEnchanted_Melody, thank you very much for reading and responding and WELCOME TO PASSIONS... My regards to all, Sudhir |
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